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I feel as if my life is sinking.
Just the other day I cried
Wishin it was me that died.

Why sissy? Why did you leave?
By dying what did that achive?
Your in heaven while I'm on earth.
I'm trying to live life for all it's worth.

I'm always gonna miss
I'm always gonna wish
That one day again I'll see you
And I'll know what to do..

I love you sissy!
7-26-99

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My sissy...

Contributed by xmisscillax on Thursday, 9th October 2003 @ 10:41:28 PM in AEST
Topic: Grief

As I sit in my chair thinking .
I feel as if my life is sinking.
Just the other day I cried
Wishin it was me that died.

Why sissy? Why did you leave?
By dying what did that achive?
Your in heaven while I'm on earth.
I'm trying to live life for all it's worth.

I'm always gonna miss
I'm always gonna wish
That one day again I'll see you
And I'll know what to do..

I love you sissy!
7-26-99

Copyright © xmisscillax ... [ 2003-10-09 22:41:28]
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Re: My sissy... (User Rating: 1 )
by LIVINGLIFE on Thursday, 9th October 2003 @ 10:46:21 PM AEST
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hunnie (i am her boy friend) i love u and great poem i am sure she is proud and looking over you

Re: My sissy... (User Rating: 1 )
by garyh on Thursday, 9th October 2003 @ 11:00:43 PM AEST
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well this is a very sincere poem, and im sure she loves it wherever she is...

you did a great job expecially for your first time.. poetry is a great way to express yourself

Re: My sissy... (User Rating: 1 )
by Huey on Thursday, 9th October 2003 @ 11:52:01 PM AEST
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Parting is such sweet sorrow...I guess we can't feel the sweetness at first but your poem is sweet. I'm sure she'll visit you somehow from up there...

Huey

Re: My sissy... (User Rating: 1 )
by jaeann on Thursday, 9th October 2003 @ 11:56:52 PM AEST
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good for you!!!! what a great way to memoralize her....keep up the great writing!!!!

Re: My sissy... (User Rating: 1 )
by Trisha on Friday, 10th October 2003 @ 02:50:30 PM AEST
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Hey this is very sad and why did she died.

Re: My sissy... (User Rating: 1 )
by xmisscillax on Friday, 10th October 2003 @ 09:54:01 PM AEST
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My sister was twenty-two when she died. She was born spinabifida. She had sixteen surgeries and on the last one she was too weak and the doctors didn't know she has blood clots and things in her body failed. But I believe she is happy now and she is looking down. She was great..so Trish that's how she died. The reason she died I believe is she was turned into an angel :)

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