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[aid] => mick
[title] => i miss her
[time] => 2003-10-08 18:53:21
[hometext] => another
[bodytext] => when i first brought her home
her screams would make me cringe and flee
her hateful eyes kept me at bay
but, hunger soon gnawed away at her will
it's not like i didn't feed her
or take care of her
i didn't put her in diapers
i carried her broken body to the bathroom
i'm not a monster
it always turned me on
the strange angle of her broken legs
and if i listened close enough
i could hear the grind of broken bones
as i carried her and they swayed
(this always lead to an aburpt and passionate
roll on the rug)
our coupling was nothing spectacular
i knew that one day she would love me
but, she still seemed afraid
so i would drug her so she wouldn't say no
if she doesn't resist, it's not rape
right?
i guess she finally got used to it
she didn't scream or cry anymore
she wouldn't even look at me
i was so happy to see her coming around
soon she would accept me
soon she would love me
soon i could let her legs heal
then, i had to go away on business
i was only gone for a few weeks
but when i returned, she had changed
she was cold
cold to the touch, and cold to me
she stopped eating
it was not periodic, she simply stopped
she wouldn't move, or respond to my blows
merely lay motionless on the basement floor
playing dead
then she started to smell
i know she did it on purpose
to vex me
to upset me
i admired her will power
even when i cut off her legs
just to get a response
she never cried out
never flinched
she never moved at all
the blood didn't spurt either
just oozed out
it didn't look like real blood
it was like i was watching a movie
one of those hard to find snuff porns
i've got three of 'em
i considered killing her
she was behaving like a child
a few weeks without me
and she acted like it killed her
and the smell was getting unbearable
i neglected her for two more weeks
and the willful witch never cried out
no apology
no explanation
nothing
when i finally went down
to beat some sense into her
i was once more in awe at her will
she had torn chunks of her flesh away
but, made it to look as if it were rotting off
she had found maggots and beetles
and laced them across her flesh
she thought herself so clever
i still made love to her
i wouldn't let her little game interfere with that
but, she didn't whimper or cry
like she used to
when she first moved in
i guess the stench that she invoked
had grown quite horrible
i know longer noticed it
but, i guess the neighbors did
police showed up to locate the source of the smell
i told them it was nothing
i showed them to her
told them about her stupid game
i told her to back me up
but, she wouldn't speak
and when i kicked her
they put me in handcuffs
and took me away
at the trial
they kept referring to "the body"
i never figured out what they were talking about
and soon enough i ended up here
soft walls, off-white
they remind me of her supple thighs
sometimes i....
she comes to visit me at night, sometimes
she still won't speak
she just kinda hovers at the door to my cell
and looks at me with those beautiful green eyes
looking betrayed
her eyes bleeding with disbelief
she won't even make love to me
stupid willful prude
i guess i'm just a fool who fell in love
i let a pretty face and a flash of thigh
turn my mind to jello
but, fear not, i've come to my senses
when her little game is through
and they let me out of this damn room
i'm kicking her out
i don't need this
i can do better
(i still dream of her
my lips brushing her soft thighs
kissing her cold body
from lolling head, to purple toes
the sensation of her icy flesh
pressed against my own warm skin
looking longingly into eyes
that stare, unblinking, at the wall
goosebumps rising on my back
as she lets me move her
the strange exileration i get
as her dead weight yields to my hands
sneaking down the stairs at night
to watch her sleep
naked and broken
naked and broken)
god, i miss her
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[informant] => Cancer
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[associated] =>
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)
i miss her
Contributed by
Cancer
on
Wednesday, 8th October 2003 @ 06:53:21 PM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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when i first brought her home
her screams would make me cringe and flee
her hateful eyes kept me at bay
but, hunger soon gnawed away at her will
it's not like i didn't feed her
or take care of her
i didn't put her in diapers
i carried her broken body to the bathroom
i'm not a monster
it always turned me on
the strange angle of her broken legs
and if i listened close enough
i could hear the grind of broken bones
as i carried her and they swayed
(this always lead to an aburpt and passionate
roll on the rug)
our coupling was nothing spectacular
i knew that one day she would love me
but, she still seemed afraid
so i would drug her so she wouldn't say no
if she doesn't resist, it's not rape
right?
i guess she finally got used to it
she didn't scream or cry anymore
she wouldn't even look at me
i was so happy to see her coming around
soon she would accept me
soon she would love me
soon i could let her legs heal
then, i had to go away on business
i was only gone for a few weeks
but when i returned, she had changed
she was cold
cold to the touch, and cold to me
she stopped eating
it was not periodic, she simply stopped
she wouldn't move, or respond to my blows
merely lay motionless on the basement floor
playing dead
then she started to smell
i know she did it on purpose
to vex me
to upset me
i admired her will power
even when i cut off her legs
just to get a response
she never cried out
never flinched
she never moved at all
the blood didn't spurt either
just oozed out
it didn't look like real blood
it was like i was watching a movie
one of those hard to find snuff porns
i've got three of 'em
i considered killing her
she was behaving like a child
a few weeks without me
and she acted like it killed her
and the smell was getting unbearable
i neglected her for two more weeks
and the willful witch never cried out
no apology
no explanation
nothing
when i finally went down
to beat some sense into her
i was once more in awe at her will
she had torn chunks of her flesh away
but, made it to look as if it were rotting off
she had found maggots and beetles
and laced them across her flesh
she thought herself so clever
i still made love to her
i wouldn't let her little game interfere with that
but, she didn't whimper or cry
like she used to
when she first moved in
i guess the stench that she invoked
had grown quite horrible
i know longer noticed it
but, i guess the neighbors did
police showed up to locate the source of the smell
i told them it was nothing
i showed them to her
told them about her stupid game
i told her to back me up
but, she wouldn't speak
and when i kicked her
they put me in handcuffs
and took me away
at the trial
they kept referring to "the body"
i never figured out what they were talking about
and soon enough i ended up here
soft walls, off-white
they remind me of her supple thighs
sometimes i....
she comes to visit me at night, sometimes
she still won't speak
she just kinda hovers at the door to my cell
and looks at me with those beautiful green eyes
looking betrayed
her eyes bleeding with disbelief
she won't even make love to me
stupid willful prude
i guess i'm just a fool who fell in love
i let a pretty face and a flash of thigh
turn my mind to jello
but, fear not, i've come to my senses
when her little game is through
and they let me out of this damn room
i'm kicking her out
i don't need this
i can do better
(i still dream of her
my lips brushing her soft thighs
kissing her cold body
from lolling head, to purple toes
the sensation of her icy flesh
pressed against my own warm skin
looking longingly into eyes
that stare, unblinking, at the wall
goosebumps rising on my back
as she lets me move her
the strange exileration i get
as her dead weight yields to my hands
sneaking down the stairs at night
to watch her sleep
naked and broken
naked and broken)
god, i miss her
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Re: i miss her
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 8th October 2003 @ 07:22:12 PM AEST
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YOU ARE SICK!!!
YOU NEED HELP.
BUT IT WAS A GREAT WRITE. THE IMAGERY WAS GOOD |
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Re: i miss her
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by Kalika on
Wednesday, 8th October 2003 @ 07:29:29 PM AEST
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whose got the barf bag?? Some powerful imagery in this one, so powerful it makes you wonder.............nah....... couldnt be.........
Kali
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Re: i miss her
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by PsychoticDreamz on
Wednesday, 8th October 2003 @ 08:13:28 PM AEST
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Grotesquely outstanding...My kind of poem..Your imagery is overwhelming, I can actually see the lifeless corpse within your words..I absolutely loved this write, Beautifully done!
*_-Psych-_* |
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Re: i miss her
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by Jason_Robert_Britt on
Wednesday, 8th October 2003 @ 08:29:58 PM AEST
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| OMG! This is the most brilliantly written piece of filth I have ever read! Your mind is genius. I have seen many movies, I have read many books, but never poetry as detailed, insanely twisted, or ironically humorous as this was. Bravo! You are truely the master of dark poetry! |
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Re: i miss her
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by Jellybellyprincess on
Wednesday, 8th October 2003 @ 08:51:49 PM AEST
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| I pray deeply that this is just in your mind----- please don't tell me this actually happened. Brilliant? More like sick, disgusting, and disturbed........... O God, PLEASE tell me this did not actually happen!!!!!!!!!! It made me want to cry it was so sick. |
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Re: i miss her
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by Jellybellyprincess on
Wednesday, 8th October 2003 @ 08:53:11 PM AEST
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| .............. Not to say you aren't talented, you certainly are, but put it to better use will ya? I mean really, it made me want to cry............ |
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Re: i miss her
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by jaeann on
Wednesday, 8th October 2003 @ 10:03:15 PM AEST
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:)
you accomplish so many things with your work....shock being quite effective.....you make the reader FEEL.....you MAKE us experience the whole gamut of emotions.......
to watch her sleep
naked and broken
......With your genius you should be writing novels.... |
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Re: i miss her
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by Merry on
Thursday, 9th October 2003 @ 09:24:29 AM AEST
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brilliant work - disturbing and fascinating - like a good horror flick - BRAVO
merry |
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Re: i miss her
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by bobotheclown on
Sunday, 19th October 2003 @ 02:56:09 AM AEST
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Roy your the master man I love this very perverted and disturbing but enjoyable nonethlesss
her eyes bleeding with disbelief
(this always lead to an aburpt and passionate
roll on the rug)
LOVED IT!
Bobo (Joel) |
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