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Corrupting her mind to embrace this beautiful feeling.
Warm blood replaces the cold blades bite.
Disengaging her from the emotional trama.
Her veins pump blood through the open wound, causing a momentary profound happiness.
She smiles as if she had not a problem in the world.
The illusive happiness begins to fade.
And the empty feeling begins to return.
She starts to slide the blade once more, but stopping only for seconds.
She suddenly hit reality "The pain will never subside."
She subconsciously begins to thrash at her wrists.
The wounds overwhelm her.
Excessive blood loss brings about lightheadedness.
Deep inside she wants to scream yet she knows it won't help.
No one will hear her, or do the just not listen.
She holds her mutalated wrist, watching herself bleed to death.
Her body begins to fade as her head hits the ground.
One tear slides down her face, her heart beats it's last beats.
As she takes her last breath, she asks herself one question.
"Will they even care?"

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Will they even care?

Contributed by Tiffany on Tuesday, 7th October 2003 @ 01:24:47 AM in AEST
Topic: Suicide

The cold enchanting blade slices the skin.
Corrupting her mind to embrace this beautiful feeling.
Warm blood replaces the cold blades bite.
Disengaging her from the emotional trama.
Her veins pump blood through the open wound, causing a momentary profound happiness.
She smiles as if she had not a problem in the world.
The illusive happiness begins to fade.
And the empty feeling begins to return.
She starts to slide the blade once more, but stopping only for seconds.
She suddenly hit reality "The pain will never subside."
She subconsciously begins to thrash at her wrists.
The wounds overwhelm her.
Excessive blood loss brings about lightheadedness.
Deep inside she wants to scream yet she knows it won't help.
No one will hear her, or do the just not listen.
She holds her mutalated wrist, watching herself bleed to death.
Her body begins to fade as her head hits the ground.
One tear slides down her face, her heart beats it's last beats.
As she takes her last breath, she asks herself one question.
"Will they even care?"

Copyright © Tiffany ... [ 2003-10-07 01:24:47]
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Re: Will they even care? (User Rating: 1 )
by EmSal on Tuesday, 7th October 2003 @ 06:54:54 AM AEST
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I'm sure someone will...just think about it...truly think about it. Very vividly written write. Take care now.

Emma.

Re: Will they even care? (User Rating: 1 )
by afraid_of_fear on Thursday, 9th October 2003 @ 02:07:40 PM AEST
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I liked this. Do you write stories? Because I think you would be good at it. Anyway, good write, keep it up x_x_x

Re: Will they even care? (User Rating: 1 )
by Tiffyo4 on Wednesday, 12th April 2006 @ 03:59:56 PM AEST
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wow i love this poem i almost lost my bestfriend just like that i think you should read the one i wrote called final days very powerful write please keep writing

Tiff

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