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You just stood there looking at me,
Guess you didn't know what to do.
Seems like both of our wildest dreams
Have finally come true.

You took both my hands and drew me close.
Two aching hearts found each other.
As you enfolded me in your loving arms,
Two aching hearts began to flutter.

Then for the first time your lips brushed mine,
At first, so slowly, so softly, so tender,
Then with the strong desire we felt,
Two tongues touched in sweet surrender.

With trembling hands we both undressed.
I felt hot moist kisses caressing me.
As we laid down on the bed.
I felt such a breathtaking ecstasy.

Hands so tender searching my body
Touching all the right places,
Filling my senses with euphoria
While enjoying those exotic embraces.

'I love you so much,' I whispered to you.
You said you've loved me for so long.
Now these two hearts that were crying,
Are singing a victory song.

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HEART FELT VICTORY (Erotic)

Contributed by Del on Friday, 3rd October 2003 @ 03:35:00 PM in AEST
Topic: LovePoetry

You just stood there looking at me,
Guess you didn't know what to do.
Seems like both of our wildest dreams
Have finally come true.

You took both my hands and drew me close.
Two aching hearts found each other.
As you enfolded me in your loving arms,
Two aching hearts began to flutter.

Then for the first time your lips brushed mine,
At first, so slowly, so softly, so tender,
Then with the strong desire we felt,
Two tongues touched in sweet surrender.

With trembling hands we both undressed.
I felt hot moist kisses caressing me.
As we laid down on the bed.
I felt such a breathtaking ecstasy.

Hands so tender searching my body
Touching all the right places,
Filling my senses with euphoria
While enjoying those exotic embraces.

'I love you so much,' I whispered to you.
You said you've loved me for so long.
Now these two hearts that were crying,
Are singing a victory song.

Copyright © Del ... [ 2003-10-03 15:35:00]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: HEART FELT VICTORY (Erotic) (User Rating: 1 )
by Putteragain on Friday, 3rd October 2003 @ 04:10:50 PM AEST
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Superb!!!

putter

Re: HEART FELT VICTORY (Erotic) (User Rating: 1 )
by Jenni_Kalicharan on Friday, 3rd October 2003 @ 06:24:51 PM AEST
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Lovely and sensual, Del..
Jenni

Re: HEART FELT VICTORY (Erotic) (User Rating: 1 )
by DreamWeaver on Friday, 3rd October 2003 @ 07:09:36 PM AEST
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Lucky you! Great poem ... enjoyed this .. Jan

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