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Array ( [sid] => 24138 [catid] => 1 [aid] => Mick [title] => voices [time] => 2003-09-30 18:35:00 [hometext] => [bodytext] => VOICES CONSTANTLY SCREAMING AT ME
CAN’T THEY HERE IT, CAN’T THEY SEE?
ITS ALWAYS THERE, IT’LL NEVER END
IT SAYS ITS FOR THE BEST, “THEY DON’T WANT TO BE YOUR FRIEND”
“YOU UGLY *****, CAN’T YOU SEE, YOUR FAT”
“JUST KILL YOURSELF AND LEAVE IT AT THAT”
EVEN IN MY SLEEP, IT HAUNTS ME “DIE!”
ALL I CAN DO IS LAY THERE AND CRY
“BUT THEY CAN’T KNOW, SO PUT ON A NICE FACE”
“THEY’LL THINK YOU’RE CRAZY, MAKE YOU LEAVE THIS PLACE”
“AND YOU WOULDN’T WANT THAT, WOULD YOU? NO”
“SO YOU LEAVE FIRST GODDAMMIT, GO!”
I GET OUT THE PILLS (ITS EASIER THIS WAY)
“I HOPE YOU NEVER AGAIN SEE ANOTHER DAY”
AND AS MY FINAL BREATH SPLUTTERS AND HEAVES
THE VOICE AND ITS MADNESS FINALLY LEAVES
[comments] => 4 [counter] => 327 [topic] => 36 [informant] => Bohemian_with_a_pen [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => Suicide )

voices

Contributed by Bohemian_with_a_pen on Tuesday, 30th September 2003 @ 06:35:00 PM in AEST
Topic: Suicide

VOICES CONSTANTLY SCREAMING AT ME
CAN’T THEY HERE IT, CAN’T THEY SEE?
ITS ALWAYS THERE, IT’LL NEVER END
IT SAYS ITS FOR THE BEST, “THEY DON’T WANT TO BE YOUR FRIEND”
“YOU UGLY *****, CAN’T YOU SEE, YOUR FAT”
“JUST KILL YOURSELF AND LEAVE IT AT THAT”
EVEN IN MY SLEEP, IT HAUNTS ME “DIE!”
ALL I CAN DO IS LAY THERE AND CRY
“BUT THEY CAN’T KNOW, SO PUT ON A NICE FACE”
“THEY’LL THINK YOU’RE CRAZY, MAKE YOU LEAVE THIS PLACE”
“AND YOU WOULDN’T WANT THAT, WOULD YOU? NO”
“SO YOU LEAVE FIRST GODDAMMIT, GO!”
I GET OUT THE PILLS (ITS EASIER THIS WAY)
“I HOPE YOU NEVER AGAIN SEE ANOTHER DAY”
AND AS MY FINAL BREATH SPLUTTERS AND HEAVES
THE VOICE AND ITS MADNESS FINALLY LEAVES

Copyright Â© Bohemian_with_a_pen ... [ 2003-09-30 18:35:00]
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Re: voices (User Rating: 1 )
by LovingWhispers on Wednesday, 1st October 2003 @ 02:39:48 AM AEST
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Expressing yourself clearly and honestly is what can help make a terrific write.You have done this here..Stay strong...its worth it :)

Re: voices (User Rating: 1 )
by deathwriter on Wednesday, 1st October 2003 @ 05:14:58 PM AEST
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Very nice write, your words were strong and you expressed yourself clearly and also strongly. Take care and pm me if you ever need to talk.

always,
deathwriter

p.s I know exactly how you feel

Re: voices (User Rating: 1 )
by deathdrop on Sunday, 5th September 2004 @ 05:24:53 AM AEST
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i some times hear voices too so i can relate loads with this.
your poetry is really good, ans even better it's great that you can release your life through writing poems.
... and oh yeah, thanks loads for commenting on my poem too. I appreciate it loads.

Re: voices (User Rating: 1 )
by guiltycircles on Wednesday, 3rd August 2005 @ 08:18:44 PM AEST
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one i've never seen... another example of why you keep me living, you manage to capture the feeling of the deathly desire of depression....love you!!!!

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