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Array ( [sid] => 23980 [catid] => 1 [aid] => Mick [title] => An Illusion For Your Mistake [time] => 2003-09-28 03:05:00 [hometext] => A sad tale. [bodytext] => An iron coffin is my bed - A wonderful place even though I'm not dead
A secure womb that is so cold - As long as I lay here I won't grow old
Cause if no one can see me again - They will remember me the way I had been
Not someone who decayed with time - But stayed young in body and mind

ETERNALLY YOUTHFUL
I AM THE SUN THAT RISES AND THE MOON THAT SETS
FOREVER IN MY PRIME
I AM THE SHOOTING STAR THAT YOU'LL NEVER FORGET

Here, I lay in my room - Forever to be my living tomb
I love the void that I'm in - Nothing can affect my perfect skin
But sometimes I feel so crazy - I don't really know, but maybe
This wasn't meant to be - But can't you see - that I'm...

ETERNALLY YOUTHFUL
I AM THE SUN THAT RISES AND THE MOON THAT SETS
FOREVER IN MY PRIME
I AM THE SHOOTING STAR THAT YOU'LL NEVER FORGET

So what? Who cares? So what, so what who cares?
FOR THIS MEMORY - I SACRIFICED MY LIFE TO BE
Is it worth it?
It doesn't matter
There's no turning back
I've gone too, far, now

But they don't remember me - They don't even care
When I disappeared - They just went about their affairs
I was not mourned - As I thought I would have been
That's what's ***** about life - You can't go try it again...

ETERNALLY LONELY
I AM THE STONE THAT IS TRAPPED ALL ALONE
FOREVER DAMNED ZERO
I AM THE BOY WHO RAN - SCARED TO BE A MAN [comments] => 2 [counter] => 256 [topic] => 34 [informant] => sicknivesevered [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => SongLyrics )
An Illusion For Your Mistake

Contributed by sicknivesevered on Sunday, 28th September 2003 @ 03:05:00 AM in AEST
Topic: SongLyrics



An iron coffin is my bed - A wonderful place even though I'm not dead
A secure womb that is so cold - As long as I lay here I won't grow old
Cause if no one can see me again - They will remember me the way I had been
Not someone who decayed with time - But stayed young in body and mind

ETERNALLY YOUTHFUL
I AM THE SUN THAT RISES AND THE MOON THAT SETS
FOREVER IN MY PRIME
I AM THE SHOOTING STAR THAT YOU'LL NEVER FORGET

Here, I lay in my room - Forever to be my living tomb
I love the void that I'm in - Nothing can affect my perfect skin
But sometimes I feel so crazy - I don't really know, but maybe
This wasn't meant to be - But can't you see - that I'm...

ETERNALLY YOUTHFUL
I AM THE SUN THAT RISES AND THE MOON THAT SETS
FOREVER IN MY PRIME
I AM THE SHOOTING STAR THAT YOU'LL NEVER FORGET

So what? Who cares? So what, so what who cares?
FOR THIS MEMORY - I SACRIFICED MY LIFE TO BE
Is it worth it?
It doesn't matter
There's no turning back
I've gone too, far, now

But they don't remember me - They don't even care
When I disappeared - They just went about their affairs
I was not mourned - As I thought I would have been
That's what's ***** about life - You can't go try it again...

ETERNALLY LONELY
I AM THE STONE THAT IS TRAPPED ALL ALONE
FOREVER DAMNED ZERO
I AM THE BOY WHO RAN - SCARED TO BE A MAN




Copyright © sicknivesevered ... [ 2003-09-28 03:05:00]
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Re: An Illusion For Your Mistake (User Rating: 1 )
by jaeann on Sunday, 28th September 2003 @ 04:15:09 AM AEST
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wow.........as always you make me think....i am the stone that is tapped all alone....yes!! on some elusive path hardly walked upon!!!


Re: An Illusion For Your Mistake (User Rating: 1 )
by Saira on Sunday, 28th September 2003 @ 02:16:44 PM AEST
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Fantastic...its so great. Well done!
Saira




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