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Array ( [sid] => 23859 [catid] => 1 [aid] => Mick [title] => Why I Bleed [time] => 2003-09-26 08:45:00 [hometext] => I hope i don't bore anyone with all this emotional poetry, comment if u like/dislike. [bodytext] => Time has passed, friendships broken,
Painfull memories, so much shalln't be spoken,
You have gone yet your ghost still haunts me,
The past shall never let me be.

I hate all of what you did,
How could you, i was just a kid,
No guilt, no sign of regret,
You scarred me, I will never forget.

You're the reason I hate me,
You're the reason I bleed and cry,
Nothing can stop this pain,
Thinking about it drives me insane.

I despise your very existence,
Want to destroy your every escence,
I hate you for the way you hurt me,
A way in which i couldn't see.

The wounds cut deeper than any knife,
I can hate you take away your pointless life,
I could make you feel all the pain i felt,
But still this burning pain won't melt.

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Why I Bleed

Contributed by poison_touch666 on Friday, 26th September 2003 @ 08:45:00 AM in AEST
Topic: EmotionalPoetry

Time has passed, friendships broken,
Painfull memories, so much shalln't be spoken,
You have gone yet your ghost still haunts me,
The past shall never let me be.

I hate all of what you did,
How could you, i was just a kid,
No guilt, no sign of regret,
You scarred me, I will never forget.

You're the reason I hate me,
You're the reason I bleed and cry,
Nothing can stop this pain,
Thinking about it drives me insane.

I despise your very existence,
Want to destroy your every escence,
I hate you for the way you hurt me,
A way in which i couldn't see.

The wounds cut deeper than any knife,
I can hate you take away your pointless life,
I could make you feel all the pain i felt,
But still this burning pain won't melt.

Copyright © poison_touch666 ... [ 2003-09-26 08:45:00]
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Re: Why I Bleed (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Friday, 26th September 2003 @ 09:47:31 AM AEST
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Again,your emotion is quite evident.It is expressed through very beautiful words.Your pain will oneday subside.Sure the scar remains,but you heal somewhere along the line and find a joy.Thats when your poetry will change into Happy happy happy. Although,happy gets read alot less than pain for some reason.But never stop your form of expression! It is a healing in progress!
Awesome write,my friend.
Angel always...godspeed...joni 0:-)

Re: Why I Bleed (User Rating: 1 )
by afraid_of_fear on Friday, 26th September 2003 @ 01:52:06 PM AEST
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this is so beautiful al, a really good poem. keep it up!!
x_x_x

Re: Why I Bleed (User Rating: 1 )
by bobotheclown on Saturday, 27th September 2003 @ 03:04:32 AM AEST
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I am commenting because i like very much. I loved the last line summed up the poem very well. Very awesome indeed.

Bobo (Joel)

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