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Array ( [sid] => 23629 [catid] => 1 [aid] => Mick [title] => Please Leave Me Alone [time] => 2003-09-22 07:05:00 [hometext] => This is really repetitive, it's got please leave me alone every other line but what the hell, leave comments, tell me how bad it stinks, lol, thanx [bodytext] => You stupid ugly little whore
Please leave me alone
You’re completely worthless, what are you here for?
Please leave me alone.
That knife looks so inviting, pick it up
Please leave me alone
You can drag the blade across your wrist, you’ll never have to wake up
Please leave me alone
You’re a freak, you’re completely insane
Please leave me alone
You’re no good anymore, empty space with a name
Please leave me alone
People think you’re smart, you stupid little liar
Please leave me alone
Come on, pull the trigger, you know you have the desire
Please leave me alone
You know what you’ve done you know you deserve death
Please leave me alone
See that shadow in the corner, it’s watching you with the rest
Please leave me alone
Watch out for that thing behind you, you can’t see it but it’s there
Please leave me alone
They’re waiting for you, and when they get you, your flesh they’ll share
Please leave me alone
Oh look your father’s drunk again, you must’ve done something bad
Please leave me alone
Oh look at that he’s hitting you, you deserve what you get, you shouldn’t be so sad
Please leave me alone
Stop crying you little *****, you're pathetic, you're weak
Please leave me alone
Why are you hiding, stop crying, it's only me
Please leave me alone
Look at the scars on your wrist, are you ready to try again?
Please leave me alone
Look at the scars on your legs and arms, only you are responsible for them
PLease leave me alone
You know i'll never go away, you need me to survive
Please leave me alone
You stupid little girl, without me you wouldn't be alive
Please leave me alone
That’s it put the gun to your head, it’s loaded, you’re set to go
A final smile of relief covers my face
I’m finally alone.
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Please Leave Me Alone

Contributed by blackfire9786 on Monday, 22nd September 2003 @ 07:05:00 AM in AEST
Topic: Suicide



You stupid ugly little whore
Please leave me alone
You’re completely worthless, what are you here for?
Please leave me alone.
That knife looks so inviting, pick it up
Please leave me alone
You can drag the blade across your wrist, you’ll never have to wake up
Please leave me alone
You’re a freak, you’re completely insane
Please leave me alone
You’re no good anymore, empty space with a name
Please leave me alone
People think you’re smart, you stupid little liar
Please leave me alone
Come on, pull the trigger, you know you have the desire
Please leave me alone
You know what you’ve done you know you deserve death
Please leave me alone
See that shadow in the corner, it’s watching you with the rest
Please leave me alone
Watch out for that thing behind you, you can’t see it but it’s there
Please leave me alone
They’re waiting for you, and when they get you, your flesh they’ll share
Please leave me alone
Oh look your father’s drunk again, you must’ve done something bad
Please leave me alone
Oh look at that he’s hitting you, you deserve what you get, you shouldn’t be so sad
Please leave me alone
Stop crying you little *****, you're pathetic, you're weak
Please leave me alone
Why are you hiding, stop crying, it's only me
Please leave me alone
Look at the scars on your wrist, are you ready to try again?
Please leave me alone
Look at the scars on your legs and arms, only you are responsible for them
PLease leave me alone
You know i'll never go away, you need me to survive
Please leave me alone
You stupid little girl, without me you wouldn't be alive
Please leave me alone
That’s it put the gun to your head, it’s loaded, you’re set to go
A final smile of relief covers my face
I’m finally alone.




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Re: Please Leave Me Alone (User Rating: 0 )
by Former_Member on Monday, 22nd September 2003 @ 11:55:50 AM AEST
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oh, i think this is good. i might play a bit with the repitition, but not necessarily... as it works i think, to bring home the desperation of your psych. i find it sad, and felt it pull me in. i like the way part of you talks to the other (but i hope you are not in this much pain). painted_echos


Re: Please Leave Me Alone (User Rating: 1 )
by bobotheclown on Monday, 22nd September 2003 @ 01:30:43 PM AEST
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The repetition added to the disturbing mood of this poem. It was quite good and did not suck at all. Once again very disturbing and vivid.

Bobo (Joel)


Re: Please Leave Me Alone (User Rating: 1 )
by hardcoreputa on Monday, 22nd September 2003 @ 02:01:21 PM AEST
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wow... such an emotional poem, i loved the repetition, kinda remionded me of when i cut myself, i just think tyhe same thing over and over a very emotional topic to write on i really love this poem hope to read more of your work ~Apryl


Re: Please Leave Me Alone (User Rating: 1 )
by incomplete on Monday, 22nd September 2003 @ 02:02:52 PM AEST
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I know what its like to hate someone so much it starts to hurt, but i hope i misinterpreted the poem to think you only hate her for self bodely harm.


Re: Please Leave Me Alone (User Rating: 1 )
by BlackFire9786 on Monday, 22nd September 2003 @ 06:19:23 PM AEST
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actually, in response to the comment above, it was meant to be someone hating themself, like having a voice inside your head saying these things to you until you're driven to suicide.....it's not referring to anyone else, lol, u can interpret it how ya want i was just lettin ya know


Re: Please Leave Me Alone (User Rating: 1 )
by afraid_of_fear on Friday, 26th September 2003 @ 04:59:50 PM AEST
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Lisa, this is incredible. What stood out to me most to me was: empty space with a name . I hope you're okay, i know we chatted earlier, but please PM me if you feel you need to.
Love and hope my friend,
charlotte x_x_x




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