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Array ( [sid] => 23346 [catid] => 1 [aid] => Mick [title] => Anxiety Attack [time] => 2003-09-17 04:35:00 [hometext] => About my first anxiety attack, which was over a year ago now, and I have a follow on which I will post later (It is better than this write)... [bodytext] => There is a hole,
So deep in me,
Corroding my soul,
Destroying everything that used to be.

I didn’t realise it was there.
If I did then I just ignored it.
Loneliness is something I can’t bare,
It’s more painful than being hit.

So I carry on.
Suffered at night,
When everyone was gone,
That’s when my mind and emotion would fight.

I’d cry long and hard,
Desperate thoughts would fill my head,
Felt like I was barred,
And freedom I would not find.

Let it all out they say,
To make you feel better,
To see a new day,
To read a positive letter.

Believe me I tried,
But the pain can’t be stopped.
Way too much I have cried,
My sanity I have dropped.

Still no one may know,
Until one day you lose it,
You’re on your lowest low,
And you have an anxiety fit.
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Anxiety Attack

Contributed by EmSal on Wednesday, 17th September 2003 @ 04:35:00 AM in AEST
Topic: Lifepoems

There is a hole,
So deep in me,
Corroding my soul,
Destroying everything that used to be.

I didn’t realise it was there.
If I did then I just ignored it.
Loneliness is something I can’t bare,
It’s more painful than being hit.

So I carry on.
Suffered at night,
When everyone was gone,
That’s when my mind and emotion would fight.

I’d cry long and hard,
Desperate thoughts would fill my head,
Felt like I was barred,
And freedom I would not find.

Let it all out they say,
To make you feel better,
To see a new day,
To read a positive letter.

Believe me I tried,
But the pain can’t be stopped.
Way too much I have cried,
My sanity I have dropped.

Still no one may know,
Until one day you lose it,
You’re on your lowest low,
And you have an anxiety fit.

Copyright Â© EmSal ... [ 2003-09-17 04:35:00]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: Anxiety Attack (User Rating: 1 )
by hazelnut on Wednesday, 17th September 2003 @ 04:41:30 AM AEST
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i can relate, i've felt this before.

Re: Anxiety Attack (User Rating: 1 )
by Avarice_Riot on Wednesday, 17th September 2003 @ 06:28:04 AM AEST
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I'm in the same boat as hazelnut. I'll be on the lookout for the followup to this one, which is actually already very good.

Re: Anxiety Attack (User Rating: 1 )
by jaeann on Wednesday, 17th September 2003 @ 01:42:56 PM AEST
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i'm there....right with you.....looking forward to the follow up

Re: Anxiety Attack (User Rating: 1 )
by bobotheclown on Wednesday, 17th September 2003 @ 08:02:21 PM AEST
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This was great I loved it all. The rhyming was an intelligent bit of work to. I hope you don't get anymore of these attacks their shit I know. Lookin forward to the next one.

Bobo (Joel)

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