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Array ( [sid] => 23286 [catid] => 1 [aid] => Mick [title] => JUS FOOLING MYSELF [time] => 2003-09-16 03:05:00 [hometext] => some times it's just a one sided thing [bodytext] => My heart would throb
at your name.
Didn't realize we were
playing a game.
Gave nothing but
total luv, comfort,
understanding,
peace of doves.

Oh boy, was I
jus fooling myself,
always offering my
very best.
Thought you needed
me 2 . Was jus fooling
myself, it's true.

Keep it all, free it
someday
Luv's no good till
u give it away.
Keep it bottled up tight
and you'll never get it right.

Should have known
all along that
luving you was
all wrong.
This story is
older than me
only one sided luv
now I comprenda, see? [comments] => 5 [counter] => 227 [topic] => 52 [informant] => emystar [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 10 [ratings] => 2 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => goodbyepoetry )

JUS FOOLING MYSELF

Contributed by emystar on Tuesday, 16th September 2003 @ 03:05:00 AM in AEST
Topic: goodbyepoetry

My heart would throb
at your name.
Didn't realize we were
playing a game.
Gave nothing but
total luv, comfort,
understanding,
peace of doves.

Oh boy, was I
jus fooling myself,
always offering my
very best.
Thought you needed
me 2 . Was jus fooling
myself, it's true.

Keep it all, free it
someday
Luv's no good till
u give it away.
Keep it bottled up tight
and you'll never get it right.

Should have known
all along that
luving you was
all wrong.
This story is
older than me
only one sided luv
now I comprenda, see?

Copyright © emystar ... [ 2003-09-16 03:05:00]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: JUS FOOLING MYSELF (User Rating: 1 )
by Ilhar on Tuesday, 16th September 2003 @ 04:21:52 AM AEST
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awww, stand tall, there is someone out there that will see the gem you are...
Shari

Re: JUS FOOLING MYSELF (User Rating: 1 )
by Crow on Tuesday, 16th September 2003 @ 05:22:00 AM AEST
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emy, hope your good, great write Crow

Re: JUS FOOLING MYSELF (User Rating: 1 )
by venkat on Monday, 22nd September 2003 @ 03:22:23 AM AEST
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very nice flow..very thoughtful you are..welldone..peace..luv and blessings
venkat

Re: JUS FOOLING MYSELF (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Thursday, 25th September 2003 @ 03:28:46 AM AEST
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Great poem! Peace be with you.

Re: JUS FOOLING MYSELF (User Rating: 1 )
by myheartsvoice on Thursday, 24th May 2007 @ 09:04:43 AM AEST
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Your poetry has a gentleness and yet says what it has to say with such impact. such a
lovely peace emy. Your work is so uniquely
you that it comforts even the most hardend of hearts. You could soothe a disbeliever into
believing.

((((((((emystar)))))))))

Ben

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