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Array ( [sid] => 23169 [catid] => 1 [aid] => Mick [title] => Violence [time] => 2003-09-13 14:45:00 [hometext] => Short and to the point. Let me know what you think. PPPlleassse. I know talking doesn't always help but I can wish. [bodytext] => Will it ever end
The violence
Can the people bend
No pretense
Stop the madness
Stop the pain
Nothing but sadness
As bullets rain
No one wins
This deadly game
let wounds mend
Both take the blame
Don’t fight
It’s no solution
You have a voice
So use it.
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Violence

Contributed by Kimmie_mac on Saturday, 13th September 2003 @ 02:45:00 PM in AEST
Topic: SadPoetry

Will it ever end
The violence
Can the people bend
No pretense
Stop the madness
Stop the pain
Nothing but sadness
As bullets rain
No one wins
This deadly game
let wounds mend
Both take the blame
Don’t fight
It’s no solution
You have a voice
So use it.

Copyright Â© Kimmie_mac ... [ 2003-09-13 14:45:00]
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Re: Violence (User Rating: 1 )
by RICHARD_CAMPBELL on Saturday, 13th September 2003 @ 04:04:26 PM AEST
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Hi kimmie-mac,
violence is somethink we all sea every day,
happen to love onces or someone we know.
i like this because you showed that if one speak out
what is happening to them we can end this violence act.

Re: Violence (User Rating: 1 )
by Ilhar on Saturday, 13th September 2003 @ 06:21:03 PM AEST
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strong, good write
Shari

Re: Violence (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Saturday, 13th September 2003 @ 09:10:05 PM AEST
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Powerful write!

Re: Violence (User Rating: 1 )
by LovingWhispers on Saturday, 13th September 2003 @ 11:42:00 PM AEST
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Well said!!! Nice and strong..and yes!! To the point :)

Re: Violence (User Rating: 1 )
by painted_echos on Sunday, 14th September 2003 @ 12:52:50 AM AEST
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very well written...should be silk screened, made into posters, and hung in the halls of every school. it is strong, to the point (as you said!), and it reaches. i will print it and give it to my 12 yr old. thank you for sharing.

Re: Violence (User Rating: 1 )
by Crow on Sunday, 14th September 2003 @ 02:49:03 AM AEST
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I agree with all here, no good ever comes from it. great write

Re: Violence (User Rating: 1 )
by Aika on Sunday, 14th September 2003 @ 03:20:36 AM AEST
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Dear Kimmie,
very lovely,
very nicely said
but the problem
is that people
do not wanna hear
it is easier to fight
than to love.......
aika

Re: Violence (User Rating: 1 )
by LOWMAN613 on Sunday, 14th September 2003 @ 11:21:35 PM AEST
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Fighting never solves anything just pain!
Sorry to say I dont think it wont end! Christina

Re: Violence (User Rating: 1 )
by venkat on Monday, 15th September 2003 @ 03:54:43 AM AEST
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Good write with a strong voice...venkat

Re: Violence (User Rating: 1 )
by norm on Monday, 22nd September 2003 @ 09:25:36 AM AEST
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Of course you're right, no one can argue,
when one is judge and jury, too,
That's when rage takes over thinking
wait for drop of the other shoe.

Man is made as man is made,
reacts quite poorly, i'm afraid,
it's been this way since earth began
the weakest point in our earth's man.

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