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[aid] => Mick
[title] => A Response to Your Letter
[time] => 2003-09-09 00:05:00
[hometext] => This is what I wrote for the most beautiful girl in the universe, when I was out there in USA, missing her so much. This is for you Agata.
[bodytext] => You haven’t been here for so long, So long have I waited… I was wandering on the desert, lost in the labyrinth Of my own dreams; everything that was, was you. Once you were a light from a star, That night two millions of stars sang about us; There was a day that every dream about you was a little cloud, Like a good friend blizzard whispered to my ear about you; Not so long ago I wanted to change my feelings for you into wind, And walls blocking my mind had to lay down under its strength; One time you were a tear, I cried all night to feel your sensitive touch on my lips; Recently you were a brick of my happiness, And I built a wall of loneliness around me; When you whispered to me like a song did for a long time, Butterflies wrote your words, ocean gave the rhymes, moonlight composed the music; Fortunately I didn’t have to worry anymore, You arrived, I fell for you for the hundred and first time. I gave you the most beautiful smile my soul had ever seen, It came to you, sat on your shoulder and whispered about something to you ear Just to make you laugh, it didn’t want anything in return, But you rejected it, remained in your Stoic calm. I suggested we could go for a walk in the direction of our destiny, So we could secretly steal fruits from the garden of passion, You didn’t respond, I asked you to go with me To the edge of Eden, high to the stars, So the time never existed, I didn’t hear even a word from you; Even lit candles, favorite music, romantic atmosphere And the whole night for us, everything perfect and wonderful Didn’t help you express your feelings for me; Then I tried to surround you by safeness and dreams, Let you exist In the silence of infinite passion, You remained indifferent; I didn’t know what to do; I was going crazy, My thoughts tried to suggest my heart that it was over, That you had forgotten… For the last time I wanted to touch and feel your skin, sensitive Like rose petals in the ocean of imagination; And then I understood, I noticed my mistake, I knew why Even a rain of kisses and storm of sweet little lies wouldn’t help; Why? Mainly because You still were thousands of miles from me and… And I was stroking your cheek on the photograph… March 15, 2003 [comments] => 3 [counter] => 219 [topic] => 48 [informant] => Drzewo [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 9 [ratings] => 2 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => EmotionalPoetry )
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