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Array ( [sid] => 22792 [catid] => 1 [aid] => Mick [title] => So Lucky [time] => 2003-09-05 17:35:00 [hometext] => "there is always someone out there who has been through far worse things in their life than you could imagine" [bodytext] => When I think about it
I never had a real childhood.
Although my father tried to provide he couldn't save me from the pain I witnessed with my own two eyes.
My stopmother, God I love her, couldn't see the hurt that lives inside of me,
Couldn't see the wounds that cut and hurt my heart so deeply from my biological genes,
The mother that emotionally harmed me and now my mind could never be free,
Broke the innocent harmony that chymes within the soul of every little girl.

My childhood was a struggle, trying hard to stay away from trouble, but always caught up,
Brought up suffering, tired of the word 'motherly love' been 12 years and I still haven't heard from her,
Hard to trust anyone because of her, I mean if your mother left you could your trust for anyone ever be true?
Yet I cry every night inside, wondering, thinking, pondering knowing, that even tho I lose Im still so damn lucky. [comments] => 1 [counter] => 196 [topic] => 48 [informant] => RealCrystal [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => EmotionalPoetry )

So Lucky

Contributed by RealCrystal on Friday, 5th September 2003 @ 05:35:00 PM in AEST
Topic: EmotionalPoetry

When I think about it
I never had a real childhood.
Although my father tried to provide he couldn't save me from the pain I witnessed with my own two eyes.
My stopmother, God I love her, couldn't see the hurt that lives inside of me,
Couldn't see the wounds that cut and hurt my heart so deeply from my biological genes,
The mother that emotionally harmed me and now my mind could never be free,
Broke the innocent harmony that chymes within the soul of every little girl.

My childhood was a struggle, trying hard to stay away from trouble, but always caught up,
Brought up suffering, tired of the word 'motherly love' been 12 years and I still haven't heard from her,
Hard to trust anyone because of her, I mean if your mother left you could your trust for anyone ever be true?
Yet I cry every night inside, wondering, thinking, pondering knowing, that even tho I lose Im still so damn lucky.

Copyright © RealCrystal ... [ 2003-09-05 17:35:00]
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Re: So Lucky (User Rating: 1 )
by Kimmie_mac on Saturday, 6th September 2003 @ 06:06:28 PM AEST
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The only person who loses is your mother. She lost out by not knowing you. She is selfish. Please let go and you will know peace. Kimmie_mac

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