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Array ( [sid] => 22597 [catid] => 1 [aid] => Mick [title] => Wounded And Unaware [time] => 2003-09-01 15:35:00 [hometext] => For my love, Dean. [bodytext] => I promise to be the beacon that guides you
My hand is yours to take whenever you need to
I'll lead you somewhere you don't have to be afraid
And your hope for the future can never be swayed

My love is the light that shines from the sky
It falls all around you, taking you high
I'll hold you tight if that's what you need
Or watch you walk away as my heart bleeds

I could be your queen
Your everything, and only eighteen
I could be perfect
The tender, gentle girl you affect
I'll look till I find
The love that will bring you peace of mind
'Cause I need your heart
If I lost you I would fall apart

I want to be the one you know will put you first
Don't want you worrying and expecting the worst
I'll be your sunlight when it's just too dark to see
And I promise to look harder at how you feel

My love is the truth that spills from my lips
Surrounding you with the gentlest grip
You could hide behind me for awhile
If you ever feel you can't fake a smile

I will be that girl
The one that made all your insides twirl
I will be better
Everything you need, want and prefer
I'll treat you so good
That you'll never feel misunderstood
All that I can be
It's been too long since light shone from me

Since somebody needed me
I forgot how to give
Since somebody leaned on me
I forgot how to live
And you, you were always there
Giving me everything
Wounded and so unaware
Pampered under your wing
And it was all about me
And it felt kind good
I forgot about your needs
I never thought I would
But I'll turn myself around
Make it all up to you
Plant my feet on solid ground
I'd give my life for you [comments] => 2 [counter] => 188 [topic] => 2 [informant] => MoonlitAngel [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => LovePoetry )
Wounded And Unaware

Contributed by MoonlitAngel on Monday, 1st September 2003 @ 03:35:00 PM in AEST
Topic: LovePoetry



I promise to be the beacon that guides you
My hand is yours to take whenever you need to
I'll lead you somewhere you don't have to be afraid
And your hope for the future can never be swayed

My love is the light that shines from the sky
It falls all around you, taking you high
I'll hold you tight if that's what you need
Or watch you walk away as my heart bleeds

I could be your queen
Your everything, and only eighteen
I could be perfect
The tender, gentle girl you affect
I'll look till I find
The love that will bring you peace of mind
'Cause I need your heart
If I lost you I would fall apart

I want to be the one you know will put you first
Don't want you worrying and expecting the worst
I'll be your sunlight when it's just too dark to see
And I promise to look harder at how you feel

My love is the truth that spills from my lips
Surrounding you with the gentlest grip
You could hide behind me for awhile
If you ever feel you can't fake a smile

I will be that girl
The one that made all your insides twirl
I will be better
Everything you need, want and prefer
I'll treat you so good
That you'll never feel misunderstood
All that I can be
It's been too long since light shone from me

Since somebody needed me
I forgot how to give
Since somebody leaned on me
I forgot how to live
And you, you were always there
Giving me everything
Wounded and so unaware
Pampered under your wing
And it was all about me
And it felt kind good
I forgot about your needs
I never thought I would
But I'll turn myself around
Make it all up to you
Plant my feet on solid ground
I'd give my life for you




Copyright © MoonlitAngel ... [ 2003-09-01 15:35:00]
(Date/Time posted on site)





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Re: Wounded And Unaware (User Rating: 1 )
by VampiricSuccubus on Tuesday, 2nd September 2003 @ 01:19:06 AM AEST
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this is great, I'd love to use that as a dedicated poem, but of course I'd ask first... this poem really says alot about most teen loves and it's really great


Re: Wounded And Unaware (User Rating: 1 )
by venkat on Tuesday, 2nd September 2003 @ 05:22:26 AM AEST
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Wonderful..wonderful..this is one of your best poems. venkat




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