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[aid] => Mick
[title] => The Sunset of Loneliness
[time] => 2003-08-28 23:05:00
[hometext] => * I wrote this one after my ex-Spanish teacher said she could see lots of pain in my eyes. It got me thinking and this came out. Enjoy*
[bodytext] => I never thought I'd feel this way I've crashed and burned again Failed, to meet my own standards Unable to meet the world's piercing glare My eyes leaden with a thousand unshed tears I'm drinking in the sunset of loneliness And longing to feel that that sharpened metal caress The emptiness I feel can never be erased Emptier I become each and every aching hour I'm lifting my arms to heaven as the tears flow freely, But no respite comes and the aching remains Weeping in the darkest of nights Hiding my frown's long shadow I welcome the night's embrace For no one can see my pain I'm crying in the shadow's someone please save me! I lock all the pain inside Stuff it in the deepest recesses, But still the pain in my eyes... it still shines through Its so hard to stay alive The depression... its choking me I have to go now and try to breathe [comments] => 4 [counter] => 140 [topic] => 13 [informant] => bobotheclown [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => DarkPoetry )
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