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Array ( [sid] => 21774 [catid] => 1 [aid] => Mick [title] => Final Release [time] => 2003-08-11 23:05:00 [hometext] => On a Dark night I got hold of my forever enemies & near a seaside on the Dock I was relieved of them finally!! [bodytext] => The Final release!

Found All My Wits, gave my last Blow,
Knelt Down at last, let my red ones flow.

All came closer, started feeling like a loser,
Axes flew across, made me feel more bruiser.

All words of heavenly Curses stroked,
Making me ready for the heavenly abode.

‘He’s a Strong soul, bring the chains’ they said,
Taking one out they slowly circled my head.

My reflexes got weak, Hands & legs got loose,
So was it felt as if they hunted a wild goose?

Slowly they tightened their grip around in rage,
Started to act dead in hope, as an innocent sage.

Could hear people shouting my death from a mile,
Appears as if I was the enemy of all “Some Vile”.

Started Getting Cold now slowly from the feet,
Could thank no more them for this Deadly feat.

The entire surplus left was now totally over,
Just waiting For the Will to live to finish over.

Pleading In under to grant me the Final release,
“Made my life hell, but let me die with ease”

Finally recalled the happy moments peacefully,
And gave my last breath to the earth willfully.
[comments] => 6 [counter] => 189 [topic] => 13 [informant] => zee [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 5 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => DarkPoetry )
Final Release

Contributed by zee on Monday, 11th August 2003 @ 11:05:00 PM in AEST
Topic: DarkPoetry



The Final release!

Found All My Wits, gave my last Blow,
Knelt Down at last, let my red ones flow.

All came closer, started feeling like a loser,
Axes flew across, made me feel more bruiser.

All words of heavenly Curses stroked,
Making me ready for the heavenly abode.

‘He’s a Strong soul, bring the chains’ they said,
Taking one out they slowly circled my head.

My reflexes got weak, Hands & legs got loose,
So was it felt as if they hunted a wild goose?

Slowly they tightened their grip around in rage,
Started to act dead in hope, as an innocent sage.

Could hear people shouting my death from a mile,
Appears as if I was the enemy of all “Some Vile”.

Started Getting Cold now slowly from the feet,
Could thank no more them for this Deadly feat.

The entire surplus left was now totally over,
Just waiting For the Will to live to finish over.

Pleading In under to grant me the Final release,
“Made my life hell, but let me die with ease”

Finally recalled the happy moments peacefully,
And gave my last breath to the earth willfully.




Copyright © zee ... [ 2003-08-11 23:05:00]
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Re: Final Release (User Rating: 1 )
by shelby on Tuesday, 12th August 2003 @ 01:23:36 AM AEST
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wow powerful write here!! I liked this.
michelle


Re: Final Release (User Rating: 1 )
by Katie-Kate on Tuesday, 12th August 2003 @ 07:01:31 AM AEST
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i liked it. deep write my friend, nice


Re: Final Release (User Rating: 1 )
by Saira on Tuesday, 12th August 2003 @ 07:22:04 AM AEST
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Welcome Friend. It's good to see you here!
This is a great write with full of striking images. Loved it.
Keep up the good work!
Saira


Re: Final Release (User Rating: 1 )
by Zee on Tuesday, 12th August 2003 @ 04:33:34 PM AEST
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Thank U very much for u r Appreciation!!


Re: Final Release (User Rating: 1 )
by Zee on Tuesday, 12th August 2003 @ 04:38:38 PM AEST
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Thank uu very much!!


Re: Final Release (User Rating: 1 )
by Zee on Tuesday, 12th August 2003 @ 04:41:39 PM AEST
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Thank uu very much for u r Appreciation & sincere Guidance.




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