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leave you chilled, heart pounding, fists clinched.

Night eyes looking in. All the corners are gone.

Shadows from the edge who speak of worth
in a paled and distant land.

Whispers so loud have filled the empty room,
leave you breathless and waiting for the cries that never were.

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Night Eyes

Contributed by crow on Sunday, 10th August 2003 @ 08:25:00 AM in AEST
Topic: DreamsandWishes

You hear cries so loud they shatter the night,
leave you chilled, heart pounding, fists clinched.

Night eyes looking in. All the corners are gone.

Shadows from the edge who speak of worth
in a paled and distant land.

Whispers so loud have filled the empty room,
leave you breathless and waiting for the cries that never were.

Night eyes what a cruel part they play.

Copyright © crow ... [ 2003-08-10 08:25:00]
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Re: Night Eyes (User Rating: 1 )
by LovingWhispers on Sunday, 10th August 2003 @ 09:54:01 AM AEST
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How very thought provoking..and so my mind wanders and wonders,ponders and is intrigued :)

Re: Night Eyes (User Rating: 1 )
by Ilhar on Sunday, 10th August 2003 @ 12:08:29 PM AEST
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haunting....sad...lets the imagination wander
Shari

Re: Night Eyes (User Rating: 1 )
by BlackFire9786 on Sunday, 10th August 2003 @ 01:46:03 PM AEST
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a powerful poem, thought provoking and intriguing (sp?) great write, as are all of yours :)
Lisa

Re: Night Eyes (User Rating: 1 )
by Saira on Sunday, 10th August 2003 @ 08:06:38 PM AEST
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Nice title! It's a verrry good write Crow.
Saira

Re: Night Eyes (User Rating: 1 )
by jaeann on Sunday, 10th August 2003 @ 08:13:01 PM AEST
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you have me in my forest.....on the wall.....the light beckoning.....the darkness smiling..........sounds and voices all around me.....your work is amazing......

Re: Night Eyes (User Rating: 1 )
by lovingcritters on Monday, 11th August 2003 @ 01:15:34 AM AEST
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Dear Crow
Mysteriously intriquing! Beautiful and not lost in the write.
wonderful crow....enjoyed for a mind that likes to make up it's own ending.
lovingcritters
connie

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