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i always dreamed of you and me together,
i kept believing, everything you said was true,
i always thought that this would last forever,

but now im, drowning in in all my dreams of you,
Im crying, from all the things you swore you'd never do,
my hearts aching, from all the things you swore youd never say,
my minds breaking, even though it hurts, i almost wish youd stay
Stay with me, stay with me

You said you loved me too many times before,
and i had to believe it was for real,
you said you cared for me almost everyday,
so i believed that you could feel,

but now im, drowning in in all my dreams of you,
Im crying, from all the things you swore you'd never do,
my hearts aching, from all the things you swore youd never say,
my minds breaking, even though it hurts, i almost wish youd stay
Stay with me, stay with me
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DrOwNiNg iN YoUr DrEaMs

Contributed by Chanti on Thursday, 7th August 2003 @ 01:45:00 PM in AEST
Topic: SongLyrics

I felt so lucky, everytime i thought of you,
i always dreamed of you and me together,
i kept believing, everything you said was true,
i always thought that this would last forever,

but now im, drowning in in all my dreams of you,
Im crying, from all the things you swore you'd never do,
my hearts aching, from all the things you swore youd never say,
my minds breaking, even though it hurts, i almost wish youd stay
Stay with me, stay with me

You said you loved me too many times before,
and i had to believe it was for real,
you said you cared for me almost everyday,
so i believed that you could feel,

but now im, drowning in in all my dreams of you,
Im crying, from all the things you swore you'd never do,
my hearts aching, from all the things you swore youd never say,
my minds breaking, even though it hurts, i almost wish youd stay
Stay with me, stay with me

Copyright © Chanti ... [ 2003-08-07 13:45:00]
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Re: DrOwNiNg iN YoUr DrEaMs (User Rating: 1 )
by lovingcritters on Thursday, 7th August 2003 @ 03:08:33 PM AEST
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Beautiful job, Chanti. I could almost hear the music!
lovingcritters
Connie Sue

Re: DrOwNiNg iN YoUr DrEaMs (User Rating: 1 )
by jaeann on Thursday, 7th August 2003 @ 05:42:13 PM AEST
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i love this one...wish i could hear it......

Re: DrOwNiNg iN YoUr DrEaMs (User Rating: 1 )
by bobotheclown on Thursday, 7th August 2003 @ 08:32:02 PM AEST
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This was well written yet so sad. I loved this so much and it was good to read something from you again. You should post more stuff. Once again an excellent write and I hope you no longer feel this way.

Bobo (Joel)

Re: DrOwNiNg iN YoUr DrEaMs (User Rating: 1 )
by xxmonstahxx on Friday, 8th August 2003 @ 06:14:00 PM AEST
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beautifully despairing

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