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Array ( [sid] => 21546 [catid] => 1 [aid] => Mick [title] => The Color of Oblivion [time] => 2003-08-06 20:05:00 [hometext] => At times we all feel like we are useless or a burden to mankind. I sometimes feel this way and it hurts like hell, to constantly worry if I am hurting others and the fear of them leaving. [bodytext] => Outside the sky is the color of oblivion,
Nightfall, shadows on the walls,
Flickering candles and a computer screen,
Trying to put into words all of the things I think,
But my mind is cold and in a state of desperate disrepair,
And I can't help but feel broken for the way that I treat you sometimes,
Shattered and alone, wondering if one day you'll leave,
God, I just want to hold onto to every fleeting moment,
And I know sometimes that you don't see me cry,
because I just want you to see love in my eyes,
And I feel it ripping at my insides,
But what can I do?
I'm Just sitting here thinking about you,
The same fears repeating,
And I can almost feel your heart beat again,
Torn away, blackened by my own sin,
I can't fall again, I won't fall again,
Because I love you. [comments] => 2 [counter] => 206 [topic] => 50 [informant] => JavaArmy [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 5 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => ApologyPoetry )

The Color of Oblivion

Contributed by JavaArmy on Wednesday, 6th August 2003 @ 08:05:00 PM in AEST
Topic: ApologyPoetry

Outside the sky is the color of oblivion,
Nightfall, shadows on the walls,
Flickering candles and a computer screen,
Trying to put into words all of the things I think,
But my mind is cold and in a state of desperate disrepair,
And I can't help but feel broken for the way that I treat you sometimes,
Shattered and alone, wondering if one day you'll leave,
God, I just want to hold onto to every fleeting moment,
And I know sometimes that you don't see me cry,
because I just want you to see love in my eyes,
And I feel it ripping at my insides,
But what can I do?
I'm Just sitting here thinking about you,
The same fears repeating,
And I can almost feel your heart beat again,
Torn away, blackened by my own sin,
I can't fall again, I won't fall again,
Because I love you.

Copyright © JavaArmy ... [ 2003-08-06 20:05:00]
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Re: The Color of Oblivion (User Rating: 1 )
by bobotheclown on Wednesday, 6th August 2003 @ 10:53:34 PM AEST
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Wow this touched me so deeply. I feel the exact same way about a girl I want the best for her and yet i always seem to ***** up and hurt her. This was awesome i love the emotion you poured into this. This was absolutely EXCELLENT. Thnx for sharing and best of luck.

Bobo (Joel)

Re: The Color of Oblivion (User Rating: 1 )
by jaeann on Thursday, 7th August 2003 @ 04:07:06 AM AEST
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sometimes even as hard as you try you still **** up and hurt the person you care most about.....sometimes all it's about is getting back to the intention of love.....beautiful read....

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