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Array ( [sid] => 21528 [catid] => 1 [aid] => Mick [title] => Quiet Echoes [time] => 2003-08-06 08:05:00 [hometext] => They stand as silent reminders
Small monuments in the grass
Listen respectfully my friends
To " Quiet Echoes " as you pass
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ [bodytext] => Quiet Echoes

How silent the graveyard
Serene the grassy field
Tho monuments of the past
A wealth of information they yield

As I walk by
I try to imagine their dreams
Their hopes, their fears
It’s not as hard as it seems

I imagine them living
Not yet concerned with death
Full of life’s expectations
Same as all who draw breath

A young man who loved Ellie
Someday hoped to make her his bride
Sent off to war
On a distant shore died

Grandma Anita Givins
Of whose wisdom they still speak
Written on her tombstone
“ Blessed are the meek “

As I muse I remember
My life too has an end
I resolve to be more responsible
With the life I spend

For I too will one day be
A monument in the grass
And perhaps another will ponder
Who I was as they pass

But I will leave a message
Quiet echoes of my stay
Sharing the lesson
I learned along the way

“ If you’re reading this poem “
“ Etched upon my stone”
“ Take comfort friend “
“ You’re not alone “

“ Make the most of your time “
“ Live life to the fullest each day ”
“ For the time of your passing ”
“ Is not so far away ”

Russ
[comments] => 5 [counter] => 149 [topic] => 21 [informant] => Lone_er [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 5 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => Lifepoems )
Quiet Echoes

Contributed by Lone_er on Wednesday, 6th August 2003 @ 08:05:00 AM in AEST
Topic: Lifepoems



Quiet Echoes

How silent the graveyard
Serene the grassy field
Tho monuments of the past
A wealth of information they yield

As I walk by
I try to imagine their dreams
Their hopes, their fears
It’s not as hard as it seems

I imagine them living
Not yet concerned with death
Full of life’s expectations
Same as all who draw breath

A young man who loved Ellie
Someday hoped to make her his bride
Sent off to war
On a distant shore died

Grandma Anita Givins
Of whose wisdom they still speak
Written on her tombstone
“ Blessed are the meek “

As I muse I remember
My life too has an end
I resolve to be more responsible
With the life I spend

For I too will one day be
A monument in the grass
And perhaps another will ponder
Who I was as they pass

But I will leave a message
Quiet echoes of my stay
Sharing the lesson
I learned along the way

“ If you’re reading this poem “
“ Etched upon my stone”
“ Take comfort friend “
“ You’re not alone “

“ Make the most of your time “
“ Live life to the fullest each day ”
“ For the time of your passing ”
“ Is not so far away ”

Russ




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Re: Quiet Echoes (User Rating: 1 )
by LovingWhispers on Wednesday, 6th August 2003 @ 10:11:15 AM AEST
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WOW O WOW!!! You have definately written a superb piece here.I believe the same ..that we must make each day count...and count each day..as a blessing *huge smiles*


Re: Quiet Echoes (User Rating: 1 )
by ladyfawn on Wednesday, 6th August 2003 @ 10:50:34 AM AEST
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wow, russ, this is great, i like reading them too lol, this is very moving and great message too:) hugs n' love nessa


Re: Quiet Echoes (User Rating: 1 )
by Jenni_Kalicharan on Wednesday, 6th August 2003 @ 11:28:38 AM AEST
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Great write, Russ...Happy to see you posting again....
Thanks for your very sweet comment on my latest poem..
Hugs
Jenni


Re: Quiet Echoes (User Rating: 1 )
by Ilhar on Wednesday, 6th August 2003 @ 01:26:27 PM AEST
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very beautiful, the stories that they tell

Shari


Re: Quiet Echoes (User Rating: 1 )
by jaeann on Wednesday, 6th August 2003 @ 03:35:39 PM AEST
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i too.....survey the serene grassy fields.........this was a beautiful piece..........it brings an odd comfort to a mother to read other children's monument's.........knowing my angel has many friends with her....and i, sadly, am not alone.........




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