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Array ( [sid] => 21510 [catid] => 1 [aid] => Mick [title] => Drowning Myself [time] => 2003-08-05 20:45:00 [hometext] => Winners always win, and I always lose. [bodytext] => "Drown Myself"
I`ve cleared my eyes
But still I see red
This pain in my mind
Must mean I`m dead

I told it to wither
But it just won`t listen
So I might pull the trigger
And eat this bullet I`ve been kissin`

My mind must have one of its own
`Cuz it doesn`t do anything for me
My stupidity is all that it`s shown
And that`s all that you dare to see

*Chorus*
Surviving this fight
And losing this war
I should take my life tonight
It`s not worth it anymore

I cross my fingers, and hope for the worst
As I play this game of roulette
Will I live or will my head burst?
Is pain all that I`m ever gonna get?

I flip the switch, and hear a bang
No bullet in the chamber; too bad
So I just sit, listening to everything
Thinking about the fun I never had

*Chorus*
Surviving this fight
And losing this war
I should take my life tonight
It`s not worth it anymore

So what was it that drove me to hate myself?
What made me want to end my life so much?
Everything was always hidden on a shelf
Nobody ever saw me or the gentleness of my touch

Sometimes I just want to stick my mind with a knife
But I never give into the things I hear in my head
The medicine has cured most of the bad things in my life
And I no longer wish I was dead
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Drowning Myself

Contributed by christopherfriedrich on Tuesday, 5th August 2003 @ 08:45:00 PM in AEST
Topic: SongLyrics



"Drown Myself"
I`ve cleared my eyes
But still I see red
This pain in my mind
Must mean I`m dead

I told it to wither
But it just won`t listen
So I might pull the trigger
And eat this bullet I`ve been kissin`

My mind must have one of its own
`Cuz it doesn`t do anything for me
My stupidity is all that it`s shown
And that`s all that you dare to see

*Chorus*
Surviving this fight
And losing this war
I should take my life tonight
It`s not worth it anymore

I cross my fingers, and hope for the worst
As I play this game of roulette
Will I live or will my head burst?
Is pain all that I`m ever gonna get?

I flip the switch, and hear a bang
No bullet in the chamber; too bad
So I just sit, listening to everything
Thinking about the fun I never had

*Chorus*
Surviving this fight
And losing this war
I should take my life tonight
It`s not worth it anymore

So what was it that drove me to hate myself?
What made me want to end my life so much?
Everything was always hidden on a shelf
Nobody ever saw me or the gentleness of my touch

Sometimes I just want to stick my mind with a knife
But I never give into the things I hear in my head
The medicine has cured most of the bad things in my life
And I no longer wish I was dead




Copyright © christopherfriedrich ... [ 2003-08-05 20:45:00]
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Re: Drowning Myself (User Rating: 1 )
by PsychoticDreamz on Tuesday, 5th August 2003 @ 09:37:13 PM AEST
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I really enjoyed this, I dont know how to describe it..Loved the chorus..Keep it up
Great write

*_-Psycho-_*


Re: Drowning Myself (User Rating: 1 )
by jaeann on Tuesday, 5th August 2003 @ 09:44:17 PM AEST
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i like this....especially the first four lines!!!!!!!


Re: Drowning Myself (User Rating: 1 )
by Jenni_Kalicharan on Tuesday, 5th August 2003 @ 10:09:23 PM AEST
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Hey..this is really nice....esp the chorus....
Loved it all..
Jenni


Re: Drowning Myself (User Rating: 1 )
by Saira on Tuesday, 5th August 2003 @ 10:19:30 PM AEST
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Good lyrics and an impressive title. I'm trying to come up with a good tune...hmmm.... lalala.... mmm :o)
Very nicely done!
Saira


Re: Drowning Myself (User Rating: 1 )
by Jacquelynne on Sunday, 7th September 2003 @ 12:32:01 AM AEST
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I understand exactly what that was about, and ....nothing left to say...i wish i could hear it...




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