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Array ( [sid] => 20575 [catid] => 1 [aid] => Mick [title] => The Great God, Walt [time] => 2003-07-17 13:35:00 [hometext] => A mouse is a mouse is a mouse [bodytext] => Down in the cellar where I'm put when I'm bad,
I discovered a friend and his name is Chad,
Chad is a mouse and it's strange as can be,
'cause I chat with him and he chats with me.

We discuss world affairs and our neighbors' too,
The price of eclairs and the price of glue,
He's keen on cheeze and he has a wheeze,
It's the dust down there and the normal sleeze.

The other day he acted prestigious,
He said he and his were mostly religious,
His concept of heaven was Orlando, Flo.
Where creators still worked and the tourists go.

His chief creator he knew as Walt,
Whose kin still worked at a movie vault.
Now, these known facts do prove to me,
That all earthly creatures have a diety.

Don't argue with me, go argue with Chad,
If you really do, you'll come out bad,
When Chad and I spoke, I heard him say,
He's ready for Walt on Judgment Day. [comments] => 9 [counter] => 185 [topic] => 7 [informant] => norm [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 10 [ratings] => 2 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => HumorPoetry )
The Great God, Walt

Contributed by norm on Thursday, 17th July 2003 @ 01:35:00 PM in AEST
Topic: HumorPoetry



Down in the cellar where I'm put when I'm bad,
I discovered a friend and his name is Chad,
Chad is a mouse and it's strange as can be,
'cause I chat with him and he chats with me.

We discuss world affairs and our neighbors' too,
The price of eclairs and the price of glue,
He's keen on cheeze and he has a wheeze,
It's the dust down there and the normal sleeze.

The other day he acted prestigious,
He said he and his were mostly religious,
His concept of heaven was Orlando, Flo.
Where creators still worked and the tourists go.

His chief creator he knew as Walt,
Whose kin still worked at a movie vault.
Now, these known facts do prove to me,
That all earthly creatures have a diety.

Don't argue with me, go argue with Chad,
If you really do, you'll come out bad,
When Chad and I spoke, I heard him say,
He's ready for Walt on Judgment Day.




Copyright © norm ... [ 2003-07-17 13:35:00]
(Date/Time posted on site)





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Re: The Great God, Walt (User Rating: 1 )
by Jenni_Kalicharan on Thursday, 17th July 2003 @ 01:40:51 PM AEST
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Norn, you're killing me with this.....lol
Thanks for the laughs....much needed..
Jenni


Re: The Great God, Walt (User Rating: 1 )
by vincy on Thursday, 17th July 2003 @ 01:47:48 PM AEST
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We are going to Disneyland are we
or is it a takeover bid we're considering?.
If Mickey is the star Chad could be the Moon
that will pave the way for judgement coming soon.


Re: The Great God, Walt (User Rating: 1 )
by PoloRM on Thursday, 17th July 2003 @ 02:06:39 PM AEST
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What I have to say I mean it really,
I know to you it might sound silly,
If you don't believe me go ask Billy,
But I saw God on Steamboat Willy!


Re: The Great God, Walt (User Rating: 1 )
by Ilhar on Thursday, 17th July 2003 @ 07:16:05 PM AEST
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lol liked this one a lot
Shari


Re: The Great God, Walt (User Rating: 1 )
by ladyfawn on Thursday, 17th July 2003 @ 07:35:02 PM AEST
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ohh!! norm!! my kids and i all read this together so thats a vote from each of us hehe tooo cute!!! hugs nessa


Re: The Great God, Walt (User Rating: 1 )
by Kimmie_mac on Thursday, 17th July 2003 @ 08:20:11 PM AEST
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This is great norm. I love reading your work.
Kimmie_mac


Re: The Great God, Walt (User Rating: 1 )
by shelby on Thursday, 17th July 2003 @ 09:17:32 PM AEST
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this is wonderful now I want to go back to Disney Land dang it!!LOL (its a small world after all its a small world after all la la lala la oh now see what ya did Ill be singing it the rest of the night!LOL
michelle


Re: The Great God, Walt (User Rating: 1 )
by LovingWhispers on Friday, 18th July 2003 @ 09:37:54 AM AEST
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Oh Just great!! Now you got me feeling sorry for the field mice here on the farm.,and you know what that means...the cat stays in tonight.***purrrrrr*** LOL


Re: The Great God, Walt (User Rating: 1 )
by TheWildBeliever on Sunday, 26th September 2010 @ 02:05:50 AM AEST
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i thought this was great! very symbolic, i love it




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