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not.
All the things i gave and it what hate that i
got.
Living in a materialistic world
one empty hearted lonely girl!
For the emptiness i wept.
For the hurtful words i left.
In this game of love i played.
In this broken friendship too long i stayed.
For the things i search for and never will find.
I found that in the end my heart to you was blind.
You hurt me once, twice, and again.
To you my heart forever did i lend.
So take this peice of land and dig it deep.
marble stone from head to feet.
burry my heart so far in the ground.
So then this love can never be found! [comments] => 8 [counter] => 181 [topic] => 22 [informant] => eternityandaday4u [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 9 [ratings] => 2 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => LostLove )

complicated love

Contributed by eternityandaday4u on Monday, 14th July 2003 @ 06:05:00 PM in AEST
Topic: LostLove

It's really hard to tell whats reall and whats
not.
All the things i gave and it what hate that i
got.
Living in a materialistic world
one empty hearted lonely girl!
For the emptiness i wept.
For the hurtful words i left.
In this game of love i played.
In this broken friendship too long i stayed.
For the things i search for and never will find.
I found that in the end my heart to you was blind.
You hurt me once, twice, and again.
To you my heart forever did i lend.
So take this peice of land and dig it deep.
marble stone from head to feet.
burry my heart so far in the ground.
So then this love can never be found!

Copyright © eternityandaday4u ... [ 2003-07-14 18:05:00]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: complicated love (User Rating: 1 )
by Saira on Monday, 14th July 2003 @ 06:31:14 PM AEST
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Very heart touching and beautifully expressed. Good write...keep them coming!
Saira

Re: complicated love (User Rating: 1 )
by Crow on Monday, 14th July 2003 @ 07:11:08 PM AEST
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you girls break my heart, very good write. Crow

Re: complicated love (User Rating: 1 )
by Ilhar on Monday, 14th July 2003 @ 08:30:27 PM AEST
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very well written
Shari

Re: complicated love (User Rating: 1 )
by Jenni_Kalicharan on Monday, 14th July 2003 @ 11:33:21 PM AEST
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Welcome to ypdc.... very touching write...but no need to bury your heart... Expose it....for love is all around...
Jenni

Re: complicated love (User Rating: 0 )
by Former_Member on Thursday, 17th July 2003 @ 01:01:19 AM AEST
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I love this poem, not just because the authur is my cousin but because it's just great!!

Re: complicated love (User Rating: 1 )
by eternityandaday4u on Monday, 21st July 2003 @ 07:57:55 PM AEST
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so um.. yeah i am new here and i was really contemplating whether i wanted to be a member or not! because my poetry isn't so good and it doesn't compare to the great poets on this site! thank you for commenting me! much love!!!
always tina

Re: complicated love (User Rating: 1 )
by eternityandaday4u on Monday, 21st July 2003 @ 08:06:11 PM AEST
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thak you for commenting on this peom!! at first i was really insecure about posting poetry on this site!! as you can see i am new here and i am not too sure about everything! i have four poems posted so far and i am getting great comments and i am so thankful that my writting is that good because i dream of being a journalist sometime in the future and i want to publish my own poetry book and i have it writtin in a book form thank you much love!!!
always tina

Re: complicated love (User Rating: 0 )
by Former_Member on Thursday, 16th October 2003 @ 11:17:12 AM AEST
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Great poem. You know who I am. Keep up with all your great writings and someday you'll be famous for your work.

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