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Array ( [sid] => 20399 [catid] => 1 [aid] => Mick [title] => Love Kills [time] => 2003-07-14 10:05:00 [hometext] => Sigh...being stupid with boys is the motivation...Enjoy [bodytext] => And if I only could, well I'd tell you everything
I'd feed you all these bits about my vulnerability
And watch as you choked to death
My problems were always too hard for you to swallow
I always knew one day, I'd take away your breath
Even though this is not how I imagined it
But really, could my dreams ever come true?
No, but the closest to being in a dream is being with you
But I fall to my knees screaming to God
Why are you doing this to me?
Why do I risk everything for his touch?
Please dear God, grant my prayers tonight
Make me stop caring this much.
I guess I finally know how it feels to fall apart
Because now I'm in a million pieces
Left broken on the bathroom floor
Waiting for the better times to start
God, I used to think I was smart
But smart girls know not to give away anything
Especially something as fragile as a human heart
So vulnerable, so naked, so weak
I long for the strength to speak
God, I'm giving in tonight
Tell all my friends I loved them dear,
Tell mom and dad to wipe away their tears
Tell all my friends to stay strong
Tell everyone that love is wrong
Let him know I'll always love him, even in death.
And when he stole my heart, he stole my last breath. [comments] => 4 [counter] => 187 [topic] => 22 [informant] => TeenageEmoGirl [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => LostLove )
Love Kills

Contributed by TeenageEmoGirl on Monday, 14th July 2003 @ 10:05:00 AM in AEST
Topic: LostLove



And if I only could, well I'd tell you everything
I'd feed you all these bits about my vulnerability
And watch as you choked to death
My problems were always too hard for you to swallow
I always knew one day, I'd take away your breath
Even though this is not how I imagined it
But really, could my dreams ever come true?
No, but the closest to being in a dream is being with you
But I fall to my knees screaming to God
Why are you doing this to me?
Why do I risk everything for his touch?
Please dear God, grant my prayers tonight
Make me stop caring this much.
I guess I finally know how it feels to fall apart
Because now I'm in a million pieces
Left broken on the bathroom floor
Waiting for the better times to start
God, I used to think I was smart
But smart girls know not to give away anything
Especially something as fragile as a human heart
So vulnerable, so naked, so weak
I long for the strength to speak
God, I'm giving in tonight
Tell all my friends I loved them dear,
Tell mom and dad to wipe away their tears
Tell all my friends to stay strong
Tell everyone that love is wrong
Let him know I'll always love him, even in death.
And when he stole my heart, he stole my last breath.




Copyright © TeenageEmoGirl ... [ 2003-07-14 10:05:00]
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Re: Love Kills (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Monday, 14th July 2003 @ 11:16:58 AM AEST
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Oh... Ash... I really hope ur not feeling this way... especially the part about giving up. Again this is another great write, filled with so much emotion, but don't give up, there are ppl that care about you. And remember, when you fall in love, you lose sight of everything else and don't realise what's happening, you can't help loving someone, and just because you fell in love does not mean you are not smart, people fall in love all the time, you can't help who you fall in love with, but it does not make you unsmart. You are a great person, one of the best people I know around here. Hang in there and look after yourself, too many people care about you, myself included.
luv stacey


Re: Love Kills (User Rating: 1 )
by MoonlitAngel on Monday, 14th July 2003 @ 06:40:23 PM AEST
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Wow... just... wow

~ Moonlit


Re: Love Kills (User Rating: 1 )
by Crow on Tuesday, 15th July 2003 @ 11:26:22 AM AEST
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this is a great write, brought a tear to my eye,
hope your well, Crow


Re: Love Kills (User Rating: 1 )
by rusty1980 on Wednesday, 16th July 2003 @ 11:46:00 AM AEST
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pretty emotional and touchy!




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