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Array ( [sid] => 20357 [catid] => 1 [aid] => Mick [title] => Promise Heart [time] => 2003-07-13 13:05:00 [hometext] => my heart is fine, I wrote this little poem , it felt good. I have learned "at a great cost" to hold love with
my hands open, so love can breath. Crow [bodytext] => Could love come in torrents
overflowing this empty heart.

Could it bring that warm wind
to secure me, and dry these tearful eyes.

Will love come again, and bring
that wanting ache, and leave me
with that promised touch,
just two hearts can make.

I hold this true
till loves reborn.

This promise heart
I`ll give, and all it holds.. Crow [comments] => 10 [counter] => 212 [topic] => 2 [informant] => crow [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => LovePoetry )
Promise Heart

Contributed by crow on Sunday, 13th July 2003 @ 01:05:00 PM in AEST
Topic: LovePoetry



Could love come in torrents
overflowing this empty heart.

Could it bring that warm wind
to secure me, and dry these tearful eyes.

Will love come again, and bring
that wanting ache, and leave me
with that promised touch,
just two hearts can make.

I hold this true
till loves reborn.

This promise heart
I`ll give, and all it holds.. Crow




Copyright © crow ... [ 2003-07-13 13:05:00]
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Re: Promise Heart (User Rating: 1 )
by Ilhar on Sunday, 13th July 2003 @ 01:13:17 PM AEST
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very beautiful I hope you find that love
Shari


Re: Promise Heart (User Rating: 1 )
by Crow on Sunday, 13th July 2003 @ 02:00:05 PM AEST
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i`m o.k my life is pretty good. if I could just learn how to spell! I forgot an "E" that bothers me. thank you for looking Crow


Re: Promise Heart (User Rating: 1 )
by Saira on Sunday, 13th July 2003 @ 04:10:16 PM AEST
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Another great write that touches my heart. Well done!
Saira


Re: Promise Heart (User Rating: 1 )
by Jenni_Kalicharan on Sunday, 13th July 2003 @ 04:37:50 PM AEST
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Lovely write...
Jenni


Re: Promise Heart (User Rating: 1 )
by Vampy on Sunday, 13th July 2003 @ 07:22:46 PM AEST
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Very touching, and once again, beautifully written.. I really enjoy your work.


Re: Promise Heart (User Rating: 1 )
by Alisialynn on Monday, 14th July 2003 @ 08:23:15 AM AEST
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Your poems are beautiful. I really enjoyed them. I am sure she is out there for you.


Re: Promise Heart (User Rating: 1 )
by shelby on Monday, 14th July 2003 @ 10:56:54 AM AEST
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Lovely write Crow and you will find her!!
michelle


Re: Promise Heart (User Rating: 1 )
by rusty1980 on Monday, 14th July 2003 @ 08:42:58 PM AEST
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this was very nicely written!!


Re: Promise Heart (User Rating: 1 )
by karoody on Wednesday, 16th July 2003 @ 12:02:29 AM AEST
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love is such a beautiful thing, we can sometimes forget how delicate it is...your heart is full of love...my best wishes to you to find a beautiful heart to share it with...great write...take care
kara


Re: Promise Heart (User Rating: 1 )
by Merry on Sunday, 14th September 2003 @ 08:53:16 AM AEST
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well done - a man who can talk about his heart - now that's special -

merry




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