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Everything seems so utterly perfect – all my life
I’ve searched for this, something so beautiful
So strong, so calm, so sad but beautiful.
Listening to the oceans moan, and I can’t stop crying
Watching these stars I feel like my heart is flying
And I can’t believe I nearly gave up all of this
…I didn’t know such beauty could exist.
I curl up in a ball and stare silently to the sea
I think how I almost lost myself to the black inside me
And I lay for hours, thinking of how you saved my soul
Tended my wounds and made me feel whole
Always guiding me through the hurt in my mind
Nessa, you’re the mother to me I could never quite find

I stand up, with my tears still wet on my face
And I hold my arms up to the golden rain
And I scream, and I shout away all my pain
And I’m beginning to feel beautiful again
And it’s because of you, my saving grace
You’re an angel, and that will never change

And to the heavens I shout your name…
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ladyfawn

Contributed by wyrd_faerie on Thursday, 10th July 2003 @ 02:05:00 AM in AEST
Topic: dedicatedpoems



Lying on this golden beach under the moonlit sky
Everything seems so utterly perfect – all my life
I’ve searched for this, something so beautiful
So strong, so calm, so sad but beautiful.
Listening to the oceans moan, and I can’t stop crying
Watching these stars I feel like my heart is flying
And I can’t believe I nearly gave up all of this
…I didn’t know such beauty could exist.
I curl up in a ball and stare silently to the sea
I think how I almost lost myself to the black inside me
And I lay for hours, thinking of how you saved my soul
Tended my wounds and made me feel whole
Always guiding me through the hurt in my mind
Nessa, you’re the mother to me I could never quite find

I stand up, with my tears still wet on my face
And I hold my arms up to the golden rain
And I scream, and I shout away all my pain
And I’m beginning to feel beautiful again
And it’s because of you, my saving grace
You’re an angel, and that will never change

And to the heavens I shout your name…




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Re: ladyfawn (User Rating: 1 )
by shelby on Thursday, 10th July 2003 @ 02:22:52 AM AEST
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This is beautiful Nessa will love this,yes she is and angel for sure.This brought tears to my eyes Im so happy for you!! Wonderful!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!1
michelle


Re: ladyfawn (User Rating: 1 )
by venkat on Thursday, 10th July 2003 @ 02:27:42 AM AEST
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Soo beautiful.. superbly done. venkat


Re: ladyfawn (User Rating: 1 )
by Ilhar on Thursday, 10th July 2003 @ 09:02:49 AM AEST
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An angel for sure she is... And happy am I that you have found some happiness...Believe in yourself you have much talent and a good friend in Nessa

Shari


Re: ladyfawn (User Rating: 1 )
by yellow_sundragon on Thursday, 10th July 2003 @ 12:24:31 PM AEST
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This is a beautiful poem for a beautiful person. It's vivid, you know. Man! Hugs to you and Nessa,

*J*


Re: ladyfawn (User Rating: 1 )
by ladyfawn on Thursday, 10th July 2003 @ 12:28:28 PM AEST
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im crying all over the place lol..i love you lucie xxxxxxxxx.... and a big hug !


Re: ladyfawn (User Rating: 1 )
by wild_heart_of_fire on Thursday, 10th July 2003 @ 12:49:01 PM AEST
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a beautiful tribute to a beautiful person. you both have kind hearts and gentle spirits. much love in all you do.

Always,

~*riki lynn*~


Re: ladyfawn (User Rating: 1 )
by LOWMAN613 on Thursday, 10th July 2003 @ 02:36:45 PM AEST
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Nessa will love this,She is a true ANGEL!
A great dedication! Christina


Re: ladyfawn (User Rating: 1 )
by Crow on Thursday, 10th July 2003 @ 10:53:05 PM AEST
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what a wonderful tribute, the writing touched my heart. Crow


Re: ladyfawn (User Rating: 1 )
by bobotheclown on Wednesday, 30th July 2003 @ 12:46:21 AM AEST
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Indeed a beautiful, captivating poem written by an equally beautiful person...

Joel (bobo)


Re: ladyfawn (User Rating: 1 )
by Merry on Friday, 5th September 2003 @ 02:40:50 PM AEST
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very well done - so nice to know that people can still count on each other and help each other in times of need - kudos to Nessa for being such a good friend to you - may happiness be returned to her tenfold-

enjoyed reading this poem very much

un beso
merry




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