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Array ( [sid] => 20161 [catid] => 1 [aid] => Mick [title] => Martirio [time] => 2003-07-09 04:05:00 [hometext] => Se sai s'ho torto ancora, sai cosa devi fare-mi DICA! [bodytext] => Ho scritto la dichirazione dell’independenza
Con mio sangue per l’inchiostro
Ed una spirita più forte del ferro,
Forgata; e temprata nella guerra e violenza.
Ho servuto la patria con tutta fidatezza
Ed adesso devo morrire, ma rimango libero:
Una vita è spenta; ferma nel nero-
Cosicché la paese può vivere in lucentezza.

Sto combattando alla fine amara!
E vorrei morrire; che cadere
Per uno sacrificio faccio ora
Muoio in battaglia, un martire
Cosicché gli altri possono vivere ancora
Lontano, dalla guerra che tutta fa soffrire! [comments] => 3 [counter] => 212 [topic] => 57 [informant] => Good_King_Bragi [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => italian [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => war )

Martirio

Contributed by Good_King_Bragi on Wednesday, 9th July 2003 @ 04:05:00 AM in AEST
Topic: war

Ho scritto la dichirazione dell’independenza
Con mio sangue per l’inchiostro
Ed una spirita più forte del ferro,
Forgata; e temprata nella guerra e violenza.
Ho servuto la patria con tutta fidatezza
Ed adesso devo morrire, ma rimango libero:
Una vita è spenta; ferma nel nero-
Cosicché la paese può vivere in lucentezza.

Sto combattando alla fine amara!
E vorrei morrire; che cadere
Per uno sacrificio faccio ora
Muoio in battaglia, un martire
Cosicché gli altri possono vivere ancora
Lontano, dalla guerra che tutta fa soffrire!

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Re: Martirio (User Rating: 1 )
by Daniela_Maria_Violin on Monday, 14th July 2003 @ 12:20:06 AM AEST
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Some corrections for you to ponder over:

line 2: "Con mio sangue per inchiostro" (take out the "L" and the apostrophe)
line 4 "Forgiata" not "Forgata"
line 5: "Ho servuto la patria con tutta la mia fiduce"
line 6: "morire" not "morrire"
line 9: "Sto in lotta alla fine amara!"
line 10: same problem as line 6

good try Good King! :)

Re: Martirio (User Rating: 1 )
by Daniela_Maria_Violin on Monday, 14th July 2003 @ 12:23:43 AM AEST
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missed something:

line 1: "declarazione" not "dichirazione"

Re: Martirio (User Rating: 1 )
by Good_King_Bragi on Tuesday, 15th July 2003 @ 02:58:14 AM AEST
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Ho capito. Corezioni sono stata fatta.

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