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Array ( [sid] => 20104 [catid] => 1 [aid] => Mick [title] => Final Vein [time] => 2003-07-08 01:05:00 [hometext] => I wrote this today..
No matter what I do, I just can't seem to pluck up the courage to go through with it... [bodytext] => I try not to, but I can’t help but complain
When all I feel, every day, is pain
I want to let it go, want it all to drain
I need to cut my final vein
Every day is a mirror of the day before
I can’t seem to find my way to the door
Of happiness, I have to remain a whore
My rich soul is becoming so poor
My decided death is drawing so near
And even of that, I have no fear
Down my cheek trickles a single tear
As I wish with all my heart to no longer be here
[comments] => 6 [counter] => 220 [topic] => 36 [informant] => afraid_of_fear [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 3 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => Suicide )

Final Vein

Contributed by afraid_of_fear on Tuesday, 8th July 2003 @ 01:05:00 AM in AEST
Topic: Suicide

I try not to, but I can’t help but complain
When all I feel, every day, is pain
I want to let it go, want it all to drain
I need to cut my final vein
Every day is a mirror of the day before
I can’t seem to find my way to the door
Of happiness, I have to remain a whore
My rich soul is becoming so poor
My decided death is drawing so near
And even of that, I have no fear
Down my cheek trickles a single tear
As I wish with all my heart to no longer be here

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Re: Final Vein (User Rating: 1 )
by shelby on Tuesday, 8th July 2003 @ 01:25:13 AM AEST
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this made me cry
michelle

Re: Final Vein (User Rating: 1 )
by Crow on Tuesday, 8th July 2003 @ 03:45:06 AM AEST
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i think life can get unbearable, and i think its a beautiful fight. live every breath, fight!
very good poem, Crow

Re: Final Vein (User Rating: 1 )
by lostinlimbo on Tuesday, 8th July 2003 @ 03:48:20 AM AEST
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I've been where you and have in fact written about it, which helps me. I hope you writing this helped you.

Re: Final Vein (User Rating: 1 )
by Ilhar on Tuesday, 8th July 2003 @ 03:54:02 AM AEST
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you have much talent, do you really think that death would end the pain? What if you take that pain with you to eternity? i have been there but always seem to find a reason to stay. i also have found that the pain eventually goes away.

Shari

Re: Final Vein (User Rating: 1 )
by M on Tuesday, 8th July 2003 @ 12:15:08 PM AEST
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Don't let go, Charlotte. I'm sorry if I seem like I don't care sometimes, I do, I promise. Just don't give up on all you have, you don't need to.
Love and hope,
EmilyxXx

Re: Final Vein (User Rating: 1 )
by Jason_Robert_Britt on Tuesday, 8th July 2003 @ 04:25:24 PM AEST
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how easy it sometimes seems to throw it all away. A few seconds of pain and it is all gone... what's a few more minutes compared to a life of pain? Well believe me, giving up is not the answer. Caving in just let's them win.... stand up and fight for yourself... even if it's you you are fighting. You are woth more then a simple blade to the vein.... you are worth more then empty dreams.... find yourself and what makes you happy.... find your crutch and don't be afraid to lean on it. Bless you.

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