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Thanks Terry :-) [bodytext] => In a mesmerizing beauty of the night,
Thoughts appear so bright.
I pick up my impatient pen,
And start to pour out all I can.

Words, been suffocated within me,
Flow on blank pages, they breathe.
Quench thirst from the blood in my pen,
Raise fiercely, storm out of their den.

Subside the pain, runs deep inside like a stream,
Unravel the mysteries of black and white dreams.
Give power to thoughts, a way to emerge,
Light the emotions with a sudden surge.

Create surreal fantasies, never can be true,
Engrave heartrending realities, my friend my foe.
Weave joys and sorrows in a bittersweet harmony,
Set my mind for a few moments of tranquility.
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Words

Contributed by Saira on Sunday, 6th July 2003 @ 07:05:00 AM in AEST
Topic: EmotionalPoetry

In a mesmerizing beauty of the night,
Thoughts appear so bright.
I pick up my impatient pen,
And start to pour out all I can.

Words, been suffocated within me,
Flow on blank pages, they breathe.
Quench thirst from the blood in my pen,
Raise fiercely, storm out of their den.

Subside the pain, runs deep inside like a stream,
Unravel the mysteries of black and white dreams.
Give power to thoughts, a way to emerge,
Light the emotions with a sudden surge.

Create surreal fantasies, never can be true,
Engrave heartrending realities, my friend my foe.
Weave joys and sorrows in a bittersweet harmony,
Set my mind for a few moments of tranquility.

Copyright Â© Saira ... [ 2003-07-06 07:05:00]
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Re: Words (User Rating: 1 )
by venkat on Sunday, 6th July 2003 @ 07:27:05 AM AEST
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MMM..very nicely done ..you have not only impatient pen but also creative one..reflected all emotions..thats good.. venkat

Re: Words (User Rating: 1 )
by gohar on Sunday, 6th July 2003 @ 08:13:39 AM AEST
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AsSalam.

A great poen read in a long time.

Saira, app boohat aacha likhty haain.
Congratulations.

Gohar

Re: Words (User Rating: 1 )
by Ilhar on Sunday, 6th July 2003 @ 08:20:24 AM AEST
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excellent write
Shari

Re: Words (User Rating: 1 )
by Saira on Sunday, 6th July 2003 @ 09:41:14 AM AEST
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Thank you Venkat!

Re: Words (User Rating: 1 )
by Saira on Sunday, 6th July 2003 @ 09:52:28 AM AEST
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Waalikum Assalam Sir!
That's very kind of you to say this. I feel the same towards your well written poems.
Thanks for your nice remarks.
Saira

Re: Words (User Rating: 1 )
by Saira on Sunday, 6th July 2003 @ 09:54:56 AM AEST
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Thanks my friend!

Re: Words (User Rating: 1 )
by shelby on Sunday, 6th July 2003 @ 03:24:23 PM AEST
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perfectly done.
michelle

Re: Words (User Rating: 1 )
by Saira on Sunday, 6th July 2003 @ 03:47:04 PM AEST
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Thanks Michelle, my friend!

Re: Words (User Rating: 0 )
by Former_Member on Sunday, 6th July 2003 @ 05:06:54 PM AEST
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U have again Indeed set the paper come to life with u r ' Words' making its words the most Quintessential ones of time.

Keep up the Good Work!

Zee

Re: Words (User Rating: 1 )
by Jarmen_Kell on Saturday, 12th July 2003 @ 10:40:49 PM AEST
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I've been trying to explain to my non-poet friends, who say poetry stinks, why I read and write poetry. I see you've beaten me to it :)

Re: Words (User Rating: 1 )
by ladyfawn on Sunday, 13th July 2003 @ 07:20:07 PM AEST
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excellent:) hugs n' love nessa

Re: Words (User Rating: 1 )
by Saira on Sunday, 13th July 2003 @ 07:38:30 PM AEST
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I don't think I deserve that much but even then thank you very much my friend.

Re: Words (User Rating: 1 )
by Jenni_Kalicharan on Sunday, 13th July 2003 @ 10:13:01 PM AEST
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A mesmerizing write..... well done..
Jenni

Re: Words (User Rating: 1 )
by Saira on Monday, 14th July 2003 @ 03:02:15 PM AEST
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Thank you Jenni.

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