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Array ( [sid] => 19937 [catid] => 1 [aid] => Mick [title] => I WOULD [time] => 2003-07-04 17:05:00 [hometext] => I WROTE THIS WHEN MY UNCLE HAD ANOTHER SIEZURE..AND WE THOUGHT THIS ONE WOULD BE HIS LAST... [bodytext] => DO YOU REMEMBER THE TIME
YOU DROVE THE TRUCK OFF
THE CHURCH WALL?
WE ALL LAUGHED!!
DO YOU REMEMBER HOW YOU
USE TO PUSH EVERYONE
IN A TOY JEEP??
ALL OF THE KIDS LOVE YOU!!
SO MANY THING'S YOU HAVE
DONE IN THE PAST..
SO WHAT WOULD I HAVE REMEMBERED
THE BEST IF TODAY WAS YOUR LAST??
I DON'T KNOW...
I KNOW THE TIME WILL COME..
BUT HOW DO I LET GO??
I DIDN'T KNOW HOW MUCH I CARED
ABOUT YOU TILL TODAY..
WHEN I HAD TO FIGHT TO KEEP YOU HERE!
TO MAKE SURE YOU MAKE US LAUGH ONCE MORE OR TO MAKE US MAD..
BUT TODAY YOU HAD ME SCARED WHICH ISN'T EASY.. BUT I WOULD DO IT AGAIN IN A MINUTE!!!
[comments] => 5 [counter] => 185 [topic] => 23 [informant] => BABYGIRLAL28 [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => FamilyPoems )

I WOULD

Contributed by BABYGIRLAL28 on Friday, 4th July 2003 @ 05:05:00 PM in AEST
Topic: FamilyPoems

DO YOU REMEMBER THE TIME
YOU DROVE THE TRUCK OFF
THE CHURCH WALL?
WE ALL LAUGHED!!
DO YOU REMEMBER HOW YOU
USE TO PUSH EVERYONE
IN A TOY JEEP??
ALL OF THE KIDS LOVE YOU!!
SO MANY THING'S YOU HAVE
DONE IN THE PAST..
SO WHAT WOULD I HAVE REMEMBERED
THE BEST IF TODAY WAS YOUR LAST??
I DON'T KNOW...
I KNOW THE TIME WILL COME..
BUT HOW DO I LET GO??
I DIDN'T KNOW HOW MUCH I CARED
ABOUT YOU TILL TODAY..
WHEN I HAD TO FIGHT TO KEEP YOU HERE!
TO MAKE SURE YOU MAKE US LAUGH ONCE MORE OR TO MAKE US MAD..
BUT TODAY YOU HAD ME SCARED WHICH ISN'T EASY.. BUT I WOULD DO IT AGAIN IN A MINUTE!!!

Copyright © BABYGIRLAL28 ... [ 2003-07-04 17:05:00]
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Re: I WOULD (User Rating: 1 )
by Ilhar on Friday, 4th July 2003 @ 05:06:33 PM AEST
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very heartfelt,
Shari

Re: I WOULD (User Rating: 1 )
by Saira on Friday, 4th July 2003 @ 06:14:05 PM AEST
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Lovely and very heart touching. Good work!

Re: I WOULD (User Rating: 1 )
by Alisialynn on Friday, 4th July 2003 @ 06:17:17 PM AEST
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Very Beautiful. I hope everything works out!

Re: I WOULD (User Rating: 1 )
by papajfat on Sunday, 6th July 2003 @ 02:57:01 AM AEST
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I did not like this very much at all. Not trying to make things worse, but as much as you say you love your uncle it does not seem that you put very much thought into this. Better luck next time, maybe.

Re: I WOULD (User Rating: 1 )
by Trisha on Friday, 15th August 2003 @ 12:24:34 AM AEST
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I know what you mean cause when my grandmother was in the hospital and I know it was almost her time we all had to let her go but I didn't though. I remember when I was little and I didn't want to go up and say good bye but everyone was pushing me up there. I had to say good bye cause they wanted to put her down in the ground.

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