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Array ( [sid] => 19700 [catid] => 1 [aid] => Mick [title] => 73 PESOS [time] => 2003-06-28 22:05:00 [hometext] => sometimes we don't know who controls our fingers as we rhythmically glide them across our keyboards- this poem '73 Pesos' is one of those. I really don't know where it came from, but after reading and re-reading the poem, it got to be a real story about a sad woman named Rosa.

~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ [bodytext] => the steamy heat
kept customers off the street
but Rosa sat by her shuttered shack
as curlicues of smoke sat stagnant in the air

men weren't there
she really didn't care
just one, that's all it'd take
so she waited with sweat between her legs

dry dirt whirls at her feet
as a car comes to a stop
she licks her lips and gets up
they want directions to L'umbre

the sun is down
she waits with beer in hand
and a cheap floral fan
waiting to earn some peso

the sky opened up
so she went in her house
rain falling on tin was so loud
she barely heard the knock
she jumped up
whipping her skirt playfully like a matadore

their sweat combined to be one
73 pesos by the nightstand
with beer, cigarettes and a cheap floral fan
she went out again when the sun came up
[comments] => 3 [counter] => 225 [topic] => 32 [informant] => starshine [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 4 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => SadPoetry )
73 PESOS

Contributed by starshine on Saturday, 28th June 2003 @ 10:05:00 PM in AEST
Topic: SadPoetry



the steamy heat
kept customers off the street
but Rosa sat by her shuttered shack
as curlicues of smoke sat stagnant in the air

men weren't there
she really didn't care
just one, that's all it'd take
so she waited with sweat between her legs

dry dirt whirls at her feet
as a car comes to a stop
she licks her lips and gets up
they want directions to L'umbre

the sun is down
she waits with beer in hand
and a cheap floral fan
waiting to earn some peso

the sky opened up
so she went in her house
rain falling on tin was so loud
she barely heard the knock
she jumped up
whipping her skirt playfully like a matadore

their sweat combined to be one
73 pesos by the nightstand
with beer, cigarettes and a cheap floral fan
she went out again when the sun came up




Copyright © starshine ... [ 2003-06-28 22:05:00]
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Re: 73 PESOS (User Rating: 1 )
by Ilhar on Saturday, 28th June 2003 @ 10:23:00 PM AEST
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good write, a few of my story poems just seemed to write themselves also.
Shari


Re: 73 PESOS (User Rating: 1 )
by Lele on Friday, 1st August 2003 @ 05:19:35 PM AEST
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Intersting story.


Re: 73 PESOS (User Rating: 1 )
by Kimmie_mac on Saturday, 6th September 2003 @ 07:59:23 PM AEST
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that was an interesting story. Very Good. Kimmie_mac




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