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Array ( [sid] => 19631 [catid] => 1 [aid] => Mick [title] => i stand alone [time] => 2003-06-27 14:35:00 [hometext] => i guess im just a loser now, no one reads my poems....*crys*

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check it out [bodytext] => i stand alone
as i wonder and reminisce
thoughts and feelings flow into an endless abyss
determining why i even bothered to write any of this
it hurts just to close my eyes
all i see is your face, and your smile
a broken dream, shattered like glass
this is my 2nd bottle now, how many does it take to forget the past
so gone now, but everything seems so clear, how can this be reality
love, pain, and anguish all eating away at my mortality

the first day, i saw your face
the first day i looked into your eyes
i wanted to live my life and make it better
every moment to the fullest
every moment with you in it
no regrets

a little over a year later
i stand alone [comments] => 5 [counter] => 213 [topic] => 43 [informant] => wil_ca [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => oops )
i stand alone

Contributed by wil_ca on Friday, 27th June 2003 @ 02:35:00 PM in AEST
Topic: oops



i stand alone
as i wonder and reminisce
thoughts and feelings flow into an endless abyss
determining why i even bothered to write any of this
it hurts just to close my eyes
all i see is your face, and your smile
a broken dream, shattered like glass
this is my 2nd bottle now, how many does it take to forget the past
so gone now, but everything seems so clear, how can this be reality
love, pain, and anguish all eating away at my mortality

the first day, i saw your face
the first day i looked into your eyes
i wanted to live my life and make it better
every moment to the fullest
every moment with you in it
no regrets

a little over a year later
i stand alone




Copyright © wil_ca ... [ 2003-06-27 14:35:00]
(Date/Time posted on site)





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Re: i stand alone (User Rating: 1 )
by Ilhar on Friday, 27th June 2003 @ 03:01:52 PM AEST
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so sad
but somebody read your poem
Shari


Re: i stand alone (User Rating: 1 )
by Lone_er on Friday, 27th June 2003 @ 05:26:36 PM AEST
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Nicely written. You're never alone


Re: i stand alone (User Rating: 1 )
by princesspurty on Friday, 27th June 2003 @ 08:28:25 PM AEST
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sad, but a very nice write


Re: i stand alone (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Sunday, 29th June 2003 @ 11:07:59 AM AEST
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daggone it.......this was very touching!!!
I will take note of your name,and be sure to read more of your work. Your talent is
quite evident! Keep it up!
Angel always....godspeed........joni


Re: i stand alone (User Rating: 1 )
by Pyrofungus on Thursday, 26th August 2004 @ 05:48:56 PM AEST
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so sad bro so sad...thats probably whats going to happen to my relationship....i feel it coming...no matter how much i love him...i know it'll end...

good job
please comment on my work too
summer




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