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Array ( [sid] => 19342 [catid] => 1 [aid] => Mick [title] => Leave A Love Too Cruel [time] => 2003-06-20 14:35:00 [hometext] => (i do have to leave him behind, somehow.) [bodytext] => please please don't hurt me
but oh god don't desert me

i love the way you smile at me secretly
i'm safe when you clasp my hand silently
you know i'm yours when you kiss me so tenderly
i melt in your arms when you hold me close

devoted blue eyes, so true - funny that underneath
all that exists is deceit

so many lifeless nights
i have lain here and cried
for this love that will never
come to life, be mine

i crave you more than you'll ever know
but if you don't want me, please let me go

can't carry on like this
you never let me know
don't pretend to have feelings
you'll never really show

i feel the need to breathe, to leave
to save myself and fly with speed

i love you
even after all this anguish
but this type of feeling
is not worth the grieving

somehow, i have to leave [comments] => 3 [counter] => 284 [topic] => 32 [informant] => faffeee [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 5 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => SadPoetry )
Leave A Love Too Cruel

Contributed by faffeee on Friday, 20th June 2003 @ 02:35:00 PM in AEST
Topic: SadPoetry



please please don't hurt me
but oh god don't desert me

i love the way you smile at me secretly
i'm safe when you clasp my hand silently
you know i'm yours when you kiss me so tenderly
i melt in your arms when you hold me close

devoted blue eyes, so true - funny that underneath
all that exists is deceit

so many lifeless nights
i have lain here and cried
for this love that will never
come to life, be mine

i crave you more than you'll ever know
but if you don't want me, please let me go

can't carry on like this
you never let me know
don't pretend to have feelings
you'll never really show

i feel the need to breathe, to leave
to save myself and fly with speed

i love you
even after all this anguish
but this type of feeling
is not worth the grieving

somehow, i have to leave




Copyright © faffeee ... [ 2003-06-20 14:35:00]
(Date/Time posted on site)





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Re: Leave A Love Too Cruel (User Rating: 1 )
by DreamWeaver on Saturday, 21st June 2003 @ 03:51:18 AM AEST
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Taken perfectly from my heart ... so well written ... I feel these feelings so very much ... Jan


Re: Leave A Love Too Cruel (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Saturday, 21st June 2003 @ 04:00:03 AM AEST
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As soon as I read the first line I fell in love with it. You are a great poet and I know all too well the feelings and emotions that are portrayed in this poem. Hold ya head high girl


Re: Leave A Love Too Cruel (User Rating: 1 )
by tease_whizz on Wednesday, 25th June 2003 @ 02:17:38 PM AEST
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this is beautifully written - i can really sense the emotions causing chaos in your head. do it girl - turn and run like you've never run before. into the arms of someone SO much better :) keep writing, your poetry is excellent, Kate x




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