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[aid] => Mick
[title] => I Take A Hit
[time] => 2003-06-15 11:35:00
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[bodytext] => It's dark as night, I take a hit. Thoughts swarm my mind like a violent storm. I can't strike back that would only make things worse. Happiness lost, only tourment can be found. Deep within me there was a dream, what it was I have forgotten. Minds a mess as I take another hit, only heartache reamains within reach. Can't get out of this slump. Words of loved ones ring upon my ears as I take another hit, There's no way out, my minds now a blurr. I take another hit, Constant ticking of the clock where will I arrive, Heaven or Hell? I've done a lot of foolish things in my life, but please have mercy on my soul. Useless decision as I take another hit. This life...is this where it ends or does it just begin? I live in this deep black hole where not even I can save my soul. Another hit, not one person can help my insane life. Tired and alone with no one to hear me, still I sacrifice for if it's not me then my children it will be. Still another hit, the end feels near. Time.....Time...ticks loudly in my ears. Yet another hit and I have fallen lifeless to the floor. Can not move, can not shout. I lie there motionless until I die tearfully. [comments] => 1 [counter] => 181 [topic] => 25 [informant] => Anglea [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => MiscPoems )
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