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Array ( [sid] => 18953 [catid] => 1 [aid] => Mick [title] => self-destruct [time] => 2003-06-12 20:05:00 [hometext] => [bodytext] => in a world of constant pain
i muddle through the ***** to gain
a crown of thorns, a throne of bones
a kingdom where i rot, alone

all helping hands broken
pleas for help, left unspoken
inward will my rage erupt
come in and watch me self-destruct

in a castle of regret
down the halls of mistakes
flanked with blurred portraits
of each smile that i faked
past the suicidal jesters
and my dead queen on her throne
you'll find a wall, where there was once a door
inside, i die alone

my isolation chamber
built from fear of reality
my defense against the world
a welcome mat for insanity

inside, i chat with jesus
and the suicidal messiah doth instruct
me on the proper way
to correctly self-destruct

so come on in, don't mind the broken dreams
littered about the floor
sup from my dish, drink from my chalice
i don't need them anymore

if you find me too self-pitying
i don't really give a *****
you can go away, but if you stay,
i'll show you the proper way
to implode and self-destruct
[comments] => 7 [counter] => 306 [topic] => 13 [informant] => Cancer [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 5 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => DarkPoetry )
self-destruct

Contributed by Cancer on Thursday, 12th June 2003 @ 08:05:00 PM in AEST
Topic: DarkPoetry



in a world of constant pain
i muddle through the ***** to gain
a crown of thorns, a throne of bones
a kingdom where i rot, alone

all helping hands broken
pleas for help, left unspoken
inward will my rage erupt
come in and watch me self-destruct

in a castle of regret
down the halls of mistakes
flanked with blurred portraits
of each smile that i faked
past the suicidal jesters
and my dead queen on her throne
you'll find a wall, where there was once a door
inside, i die alone

my isolation chamber
built from fear of reality
my defense against the world
a welcome mat for insanity

inside, i chat with jesus
and the suicidal messiah doth instruct
me on the proper way
to correctly self-destruct

so come on in, don't mind the broken dreams
littered about the floor
sup from my dish, drink from my chalice
i don't need them anymore

if you find me too self-pitying
i don't really give a *****
you can go away, but if you stay,
i'll show you the proper way
to implode and self-destruct




Copyright © Cancer ... [ 2003-06-12 20:05:00]
(Date/Time posted on site)





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Re: self-destruct (User Rating: 1 )
by BlackFire9786 on Thursday, 12th June 2003 @ 09:25:21 PM AEST
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wow, this is quite a poem, the pain and lonliness so evident, i loved it! Luv ya lotz-Lisa


Re: self-destruct (User Rating: 1 )
by Kindredblood_dragon on Thursday, 12th June 2003 @ 09:53:16 PM AEST
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Dark cold heartless, this has it all, the excessive pain, beautifully written, you have a masterful way of self expression.
Loved this poem, keep it up.


Re: self-destruct (User Rating: 1 )
by MoonlitAngel on Friday, 13th June 2003 @ 05:12:48 AM AEST
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"don't mind the broken dreams" - love it!

Excellent!

~ Moonlit


Re: self-destruct (User Rating: 1 )
by M on Friday, 13th June 2003 @ 10:07:01 AM AEST
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This is so amazing. I have no words.


Re: self-destruct (User Rating: 1 )
by bobotheclown on Friday, 13th June 2003 @ 02:59:38 PM AEST
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this is stunning tottally captivating... I'd say more but I have to read it again.

Bobo (Joel)


Re: self-destruct (User Rating: 1 )
by Saira on Friday, 13th June 2003 @ 05:10:53 PM AEST
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Such rage, pain and lonliness....amazing! It's a very well written poem. I like it a lot.


Re: self-destruct (User Rating: 1 )
by deadly_blaZe on Friday, 13th June 2003 @ 06:47:16 PM AEST
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this was the sh*t! 'all helping hands broken..' i loved it
XxEricaxX




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