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Array ( [sid] => 18906 [catid] => 1 [aid] => Mick [title] => ::Weeping from Within:: [time] => 2003-06-11 18:45:00 [hometext] => This was written about my friend Courtney. Her Aunt Lou just died and they were really close. She's trying very hard to get through this and I wrote this as if i were in her place. God Bless! [bodytext] => “Aunt Lou!?”
“Aunt Lou can you hear me?”
“Aunt Lou wake up!”
“Please!…Please Aunt Lou!
…Come back to me”

There u are
Forever lifeless
Angels taking u away,
I don’t know what to do
I don’t know what to say.

Im living in a nightmare
I cant describe how I feel
I want to rip you out of that casket
.. everything is so unreal.

You look just like before
You have the same beautiful face
But ill never see those eyes open
Your forever trapped in that case.

Your death was a curse
Yet also a blessing
Because you cant feel the pain
Your no longer suffereing.

With my last teardrops falling
I know I will never forget
The day my Dear Aunt Lou died
And the day that my soul wept.

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::Weeping from Within::

Contributed by deadly_blaZe on Wednesday, 11th June 2003 @ 06:45:00 PM in AEST
Topic: goodbyepoetry

“Aunt Lou!?”
“Aunt Lou can you hear me?”
“Aunt Lou wake up!”
“Please!…Please Aunt Lou!
…Come back to me”

There u are
Forever lifeless
Angels taking u away,
I don’t know what to do
I don’t know what to say.

Im living in a nightmare
I cant describe how I feel
I want to rip you out of that casket
.. everything is so unreal.

You look just like before
You have the same beautiful face
But ill never see those eyes open
Your forever trapped in that case.

Your death was a curse
Yet also a blessing
Because you cant feel the pain
Your no longer suffereing.

With my last teardrops falling
I know I will never forget
The day my Dear Aunt Lou died
And the day that my soul wept.

Copyright Â© deadly_blaZe ... [ 2003-06-11 18:45:00]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: ::Weeping from Within:: (User Rating: 1 )
by ladyfawn on Wednesday, 11th June 2003 @ 08:00:18 PM AEST
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a very sweet and lovely tribute to courtney's aunty lou, well done, blessings, love n' hugs, nessa

Re: ::Weeping from Within:: (User Rating: 1 )
by Jenni_Kalicharan on Thursday, 12th June 2003 @ 12:28:10 AM AEST
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So very sad..but well written...Hope she finds some solace in this write..
Hugs to you both,
Jenni

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