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[aid] => mick
[title] => Since You`ve Been Gone
[time] => 2019-11-20 16:20:36
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[bodytext] => I wish you were here
To quell my lonely tears
To eliminate my overwhelming fears
I wish you were here
To help me reminisce the passing of the years
Since you`ve been gone
I`m not the only lonely one
The town has grown quiet
Depression the only rage
For it will not be caged
Since you`ve been gone
I`m all alone
In the calm and silence
I try to find hope
So that I may find peace and cope
Still, everything seems so wrong
Since you`ve been gone
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Since You`ve Been Gone
Contributed by
jamesstockdale
on
Wednesday, 20th November 2019 @ 04:20:36 PM in AEST
Topic:
anguished
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I wish you were here
To quell my lonely tears
To eliminate my overwhelming fears
I wish you were here
To help me reminisce the passing of the years
Since you`ve been gone
I`m not the only lonely one
The town has grown quiet
Depression the only rage
For it will not be caged
Since you`ve been gone
I`m all alone
In the calm and silence
I try to find hope
So that I may find peace and cope
Still, everything seems so wrong
Since you`ve been gone
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jamesstockdale
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Re: Since You`ve Been Gone
(User Rating: 1 ) by Deidra_Carmichael on
Saturday, 23rd November 2019 @ 04:14:05 AM AEST (User
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Man, the pangs of grief hit me as I read! You poured your heart out earnestly and smoothly here. Smooth and simple. Loved it,
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Re: Since You`ve Been Gone
(User Rating: 1 ) by unknown_utopia on
Saturday, 23rd November 2019 @ 10:34:02 PM AEST (User
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Deep emotional hit
you and all the surrounding effects affected
by the missing prescience
the sadness is felt in this flow |
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Re: Since You`ve Been Gone
(User Rating: 1 ) by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 26th November 2019 @ 07:47:55 AM AEST (User
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I came here to read this again and I thought, wait, what? I thought I commented on this.
Nicely done, Jimmy. It`s not so wrong to rhyme it with gone. 😁
Nice flow but mend the heart and be glad she`s // gone. //Sometimes I feel that they`re not worth it but that`s today. Tomorrow I`ll be whining about a "her" too. 😬 |
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Re: Since You`ve Been Gone
(User Rating: 1 ) by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 26th November 2019 @ 01:40:19 PM AEST (User
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Now that I know what this is about, my deepest apologies and condolences!!! So sorry. Sorry for what you/'/re going through and sorry for your loss. 💙
Sorry I misunderstood. |
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Re: Since You`ve Been Gone
(User Rating: 1 ) by hauntedscorp on
Tuesday, 26th November 2019 @ 05:09:19 PM AEST (User
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Heartfelt and sincere.
//Depression the only rage// ....
Weighty and clever line that hits home.
Thanks for sharing.
~Scorp |
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Re: Since You`ve Been Gone
(User Rating: 1 ) by speedy on
Wednesday, 4th December 2019 @ 08:27:10 PM AEST (User
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Absolutely beautiful! So full of emotion and heartfelt sorrow, that I had to read it a few times. I can relate to this completely, and my sympathies are with you and your family for whatever loss you have suffered.
Great write!
Hannah B |
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Re: Since You`ve Been Gone
(User Rating: 1 ) by Puppy_dog_eyes on
Saturday, 7th December 2019 @ 01:23:17 AM AEST (User
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When someone is gone, it/'/s like a jigsaw with a missing piece.
No matter how we try to think or act, that missing piece still haunts us.
Life is tough and I know you know that by the words you have used.
Steve |
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