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[sid] => 186583
[catid] => 1
[aid] => mick
[title] => MadMan Waters
[time] => 2019-10-03 20:20:28
[hometext] => inspired by a banjosandwitch flow....
[bodytext] => A fear of falling asleep
cracks my head in time
I am no longer observing situations
now I am standing in line
just a number
my routines defined
ticking clocks and automation
keeps the assimilation in motion
we will all be confined
me I disconnect
for short moments at a time
though I am mentally twisted
in those moments
I can see the matrix fine
but then it is back
to standing in line
blinded by this reality
my persona has been consigned
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[counter] => 65
[topic] => 73
[informant] => unknown_utopia
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MadMan Waters
Contributed by
unknown_utopia
on
Thursday, 3rd October 2019 @ 08:20:28 PM in AEST
Topic:
abstract
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A fear of falling asleep
cracks my head in time
I am no longer observing situations
now I am standing in line
just a number
my routines defined
ticking clocks and automation
keeps the assimilation in motion
we will all be confined
me I disconnect
for short moments at a time
though I am mentally twisted
in those moments
I can see the matrix fine
but then it is back
to standing in line
blinded by this reality
my persona has been consigned
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2019-10-03 20:20:28] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: MadMan Waters
(User Rating: 1 ) by Former_Member on
Friday, 4th October 2019 @ 07:02:47 AM AEST (User
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Nice!
"we will all be confined" ⬅️ That line really resonates with me. If you believe the alien conspiracy theorists, we will all be mind controlled, by 2029 I think. There will be no borders, one leader of the world, no money as we know it and there will be no caring or empathy.
Love this one, u_u.
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Re: MadMan Waters
(User Rating: 1 ) by Former_Member on
Friday, 4th October 2019 @ 07:03:21 AM AEST (User
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Inspiration is a great thing! |
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Re: MadMan Waters
(User Rating: 1 ) by JamesStockdale on
Sunday, 6th October 2019 @ 03:57:43 AM AEST (User
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Comes off robotic to me and I myself really like this write. Not your norm but a great poem that can be construed many ways. Nice indeed! |
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