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[sid] => 186550
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[aid] => mick
[title] => Feeling Words
[time] => 2019-09-19 08:28:06
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[bodytext] => When one starts
to lose
the line
from observing
what one writes
to the full immersion
of the feelings
of the words
one is thinking
one becomes lost
losing the balance
between sadness
and painfull screams
forcing back
frustrated tears
of what could be
While ones mind
desperately try/'/s
to smother
the pain
of feeling
Despair
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Feeling Words
Contributed by
drone
on
Thursday, 19th September 2019 @ 08:28:06 AM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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When one starts
to lose
the line
from observing
what one writes
to the full immersion
of the feelings
of the words
one is thinking
one becomes lost
losing the balance
between sadness
and painfull screams
forcing back
frustrated tears
of what could be
While ones mind
desperately try/'/s
to smother
the pain
of feeling
Despair
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Re: Feeling Words
(User Rating: 1 ) by unknown_utopia on
Thursday, 19th September 2019 @ 02:19:52 PM AEST (User
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indeed but from that despair comes
a release of the screams and the pain
that are swirling inside
well done... |
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Re: Feeling Words
(User Rating: 1 ) by Former_Member on
Sunday, 22nd September 2019 @ 08:14:11 AM AEST (User
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I guess to have some rules about subject pronoun
to think about you before me
I went with my friend,
rather than me and my friend went down
to study English after school
because it was better than studying Russian
which we were forced to do.
Which we did not want to study because it was foisted
upon us.
structure is lost, it is incomplete thought
unless it is something you think to use
for a reason.
the line like the one liner is all you got big boy
Mae West
Jean Harlow
they sealed their fate
there is something in this world that makes men
lose their heads- they couldn/'/t be fair if they tried.
Is it their true nature, or is it something they might
have picked up while they were waiting in the queue
for a taxi or a train, or possibly an airplane, or does anybody really actually know
Buster Keaton
One Week.
Peace! |
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