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[aid] => mick
[title] => The Warmest Farewell
[time] => 2019-05-01 22:02:12
[hometext] => For J, this Supergirl just couldn’t fall for the mere mortal
[bodytext] => The strongest embrace, the sweetest kiss
Things that perfect romances are made of
The touch of a hand, a glimpse into the eyes
Embellishments of the finest quality
Yet they deteriorate in the absence of love
Sole desire for another that shines eternal
The admiration, adoration of a soul’s mere existence
The foundation required for a weatherproof haven
Thus I’m forced to break this contract
One fortunately signed in erasable ink
One-sided endearment is less than you deserve
Indeed my heart’s exertion failed to produce
The necessary affection
So I bid you the warmest farewell I can conjure
Sorrowful that it’s your own heart I’ve injured
Still you assure me of your strength
And relief that we’ve prevented
A most destructive collapse
Of a shaky house built on quicksand
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The Warmest Farewell
Contributed by
Deidra_Carmichael
on
Wednesday, 1st May 2019 @ 10:02:12 PM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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The strongest embrace, the sweetest kiss
Things that perfect romances are made of
The touch of a hand, a glimpse into the eyes
Embellishments of the finest quality
Yet they deteriorate in the absence of love
Sole desire for another that shines eternal
The admiration, adoration of a soul’s mere existence
The foundation required for a weatherproof haven
Thus I’m forced to break this contract
One fortunately signed in erasable ink
One-sided endearment is less than you deserve
Indeed my heart’s exertion failed to produce
The necessary affection
So I bid you the warmest farewell I can conjure
Sorrowful that it’s your own heart I’ve injured
Still you assure me of your strength
And relief that we’ve prevented
A most destructive collapse
Of a shaky house built on quicksand
Copyright ©
Deidra_Carmichael
... [
2019-05-01 22:02:12] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: The Warmest Farewell
(User Rating: 1 ) by JamesStockdale on
Thursday, 2nd May 2019 @ 12:13:02 AM AEST (User
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The truth hurts sometimes...
Great writing!!! |
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Re: The Warmest Farewell
(User Rating: 1 ) by Invierno on
Thursday, 2nd May 2019 @ 10:41:14 PM AEST (User
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The essence of elegance. Very well crafted, and nice job not striving for a rhyme scheme.
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Re: The Warmest Farewell
(User Rating: 1 ) by softerware on
Saturday, 4th May 2019 @ 02:03:10 AM AEST (User
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The kindest of farewells, written as a gentle conversation first with oneself and then gently set upon the doorstep of the one you wish not to injure with words whose sharp edges bear the truth that must be spoken.
The beauty of your write is the criteria to which you elevate a loving relationship. It bestows upon the reader a standard to aspire as we are afforded the opportunity to eavesdrop on your elequent goodbye.
softerware |
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