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Right There
Contributed by
BlackFire9786
on
Thursday, 5th June 2003 @ 12:05:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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When the cold becomes
Too much to bear
Even though he cannot see me
I will be standing right there
When the road becomes too long
And hes lost in despair
Please let him realize
I am standing right there
And at night when he crawls into bed
All alone, thinking its not fair
Let him turn, and see my face
For Ill be laying right there
When he walks among the people
Pretending to not have a care
Let his racing mind and pounding heart know
Holding his hand, I am right there.
And when no light can shine through
Into this imprisoning lair
When these walls act as my prison
Please let him be right there
When my secrets become too much
And I have no one with whom to share
Please let him be listening
Let him be standing right there
And with my heart so torn now
Every day a little more it shall tear
When I feel the pain my heart feels
Let him be standing right there.
And when I lose all my hope
And dont think anyone can hear my prayers
Please let me have the comfort
Of knowing hes always there
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Re: Right There
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by wild_heart_of_fire on
Thursday, 5th June 2003 @ 03:38:29 PM AEST
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Awwwwwww!!!! you wrote a mushy love poem!!!! i'm so proud of you!!! it's really good 2...i knew you could do it! great write lis...(i know deep down that your romantic) haha...love ya bunches.
Your twin,
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Re: Right There
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by BlackFire9786 on
Thursday, 5th June 2003 @ 05:54:20 PM AEST
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Riki......I luv ya......but DONT push it! haha
Luv ya lotz-Lisa |
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Re: Right There
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by Trisha on
Friday, 6th June 2003 @ 12:17:18 AM AEST
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hey Lisa,
this is a good poem and i think you shouldnt give up...i hope we become good friends...
Mandy |
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