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[sid] => 186147
[catid] => 1
[aid] => mick
[title] => Should Not
[time] => 2019-04-21 01:52:33
[hometext] =>
[bodytext] => Shame should never be the blame
For showing how I feel
Embarrassment should not resent
Those feelings that are real
For if I dare to show I care
Should not make you recoil
If that’s the way, I’ll back away
Our friendship not to foil
Withdrawing some should not be done
It makes me feel weak
For in your eyes it’s my demise
Approval that I seek
But cheeks are red am feeling dread
I’m humbled on this day
Apology for being me
I should not have to say
PKS
4/11/19
[comments] => 4
[counter] => 192
[topic] => 61
[informant] => Jecks
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[alanguage] => english
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[pollID] => 0
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[ratings] => 0
[editpoem] => 1
[associated] =>
[topicname] => selfstruggles
)
Should Not
Contributed by
Jecks
on
Sunday, 21st April 2019 @ 01:52:33 AM in AEST
Topic:
selfstruggles
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Shame should never be the blame
For showing how I feel
Embarrassment should not resent
Those feelings that are real
For if I dare to show I care
Should not make you recoil
If that’s the way, I’ll back away
Our friendship not to foil
Withdrawing some should not be done
It makes me feel weak
For in your eyes it’s my demise
Approval that I seek
But cheeks are red am feeling dread
I’m humbled on this day
Apology for being me
I should not have to say
PKS
4/11/19
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Jecks
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Re: Should Not
(User Rating: 1 ) by Former_Member on
Sunday, 21st April 2019 @ 05:03:19 AM AEST (User
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sometimes there seems to be no way out.
when the honesty fails, and you question
just how to be true, and how to be a friend
when things that have changed, changed
in the dark, without you being around enough
to know.
Peace! |
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Re: Should Not
(User Rating: 1 ) by JamesStockdale on
Monday, 22nd April 2019 @ 09:07:52 PM AEST (User
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This is absolutely spot on.
Great flow and writing. |
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Re: Should Not
(User Rating: 1 ) by Breezy on
Friday, 26th April 2019 @ 03:46:21 AM AEST (User
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Ugh. The worst feeling in the world Jeckster. And I am far too
familiar with it, and I know full well that being another HR that you are, too.
I want to love this poem, but there is a black hole of emotion affiliated
with it that just makes me so entirely sad. And that, my friend is the
beauty and torture of your poetry. How easily it can manipulate the heart.
Nice writing, my friend.
~B
^_^
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Re: Should Not
(User Rating: 1 ) by NoSaint on
Tuesday, 30th April 2019 @ 12:09:28 AM AEST (User
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well said |
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