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[aid] => mick
[title] => Got Me Blue
[time] => 2019-01-16 20:14:12
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[bodytext] => The gray skies have got me blue
Cause baby I`m missing you.
Snow on the ground
Makes me so sad
Cause you ain`t around
When I`m feeling down
I walk the town
But you`re never around
Others come and go
But they`ll never know
My heart only grieves for you.
This my dear is true
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[informant] => jamesstockdale
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Got Me Blue
Contributed by
jamesstockdale
on
Wednesday, 16th January 2019 @ 08:14:12 PM in AEST
Topic:
LoveRemembered
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The gray skies have got me blue
Cause baby I`m missing you.
Snow on the ground
Makes me so sad
Cause you ain`t around
When I`m feeling down
I walk the town
But you`re never around
Others come and go
But they`ll never know
My heart only grieves for you.
This my dear is true
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jamesstockdale
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2019-01-16 20:14:12] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: Got Me Blue
(User Rating: 1 ) by ingeniusidiot on
Thursday, 17th January 2019 @ 10:11:00 PM AEST (User
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How very true about the ones we love. If we are
around them every minute of every day we never
realize how much we love and need them until they
arent there. Beautifully written.
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Re: Got Me Blue
(User Rating: 1 ) by softerware on
Friday, 18th January 2019 @ 10:49:01 PM AEST (User
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How well you describe the obsession of love.
I find an underlying message here that we romanticize when the object of our love is absent. (absence makes the heart grow fonder).
You can freely express feelings when your love will never hear them, and we are assured that she is nowhere to be found.
Your writing is becoming more concise, and I envy your readership! Evidence that your poetry is enjoying universal appeal.
How dare you be more popular than me? :)
softerware
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Re: Got Me Blue
(User Rating: 1 ) by Former_Member on
Friday, 28th August 2020 @ 04:26:23 AM AEST (User
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//// And yet here we are again with our parallel lives, Jimmy/Timmy/Timmy/Jimmy, etc etc etc.
My heart only grieves for a different her but I`m finally done. I hope.
Well written, TimmyJimmy. We take pride in our poems.
JimmyTimmy
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