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[title] => In Her Eyes
[time] => 2018-12-03 16:49:52
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[bodytext] => In her eyes were my fantasies hidden in disguise
If I was only more wise
I*d have found a way to win her
Cause she was my prize
In her eyes was my future
But I was too blind to see
What promise they held in store for me
I foolishly gave away tomorrow
Dreaming of only yesterday
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In Her Eyes
Contributed by
jamesstockdale
on
Monday, 3rd December 2018 @ 04:49:52 PM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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In her eyes were my fantasies hidden in disguise
If I was only more wise
I*d have found a way to win her
Cause she was my prize
In her eyes was my future
But I was too blind to see
What promise they held in store for me
I foolishly gave away tomorrow
Dreaming of only yesterday
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jamesstockdale
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2018-12-03 16:49:52] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: In Her Eyes
(User Rating: 1 ) by Invierno on
Monday, 3rd December 2018 @ 07:21:20 PM AEST (User
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Painful stuff...I feel for you, man. Hindsight is 20/20, eh?
Keep writing it out my friend.
Mike |
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Re: In Her Eyes
(User Rating: 1 ) by softerware on
Monday, 3rd December 2018 @ 08:50:11 PM AEST (User
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I like this a lot James. It reminds me not to live in the future or the past, or I will miss the present.
But it also points out that the past is NOT the present, and we must be careful not to associate our history on a new day or person.
A double whammy! Nice job!
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Re: In Her Eyes
(User Rating: 1 ) by unknown_utopia on
Tuesday, 4th December 2018 @ 01:40:34 AM AEST (User
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The thoughts of what was lost scar and haunt us.... |
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Re: In Her Eyes
(User Rating: 1 ) by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 4th December 2018 @ 11:03:24 PM AEST (User
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//Even though I`m sorry this causes you pain, I sooooo love these poems of yours like this because I can really relate! If I didn`t know better, I`d think you were writing about my life. Obviously something we both share.
Great writing, Jimmy!
Timmy
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