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[title] => The night I knew I loved him.
[time] => 2018-11-05 19:27:32
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[bodytext] => I can tell you the moment I fell in love;
Exactly, precisely, recalled.
It was Saturday night; our first date,
Yes, youre right;
The shortest courtship of all!
He was ten minutes late; but his driving was straight;
Til a rabbit jumped into the road.
He came to a stop, til the rabbit could hop;
Back to its forest abode.
But that wasn’t why I fell for the guy;
It was one word that made him my honey:
My heart went astray; I recall to this day;
When he called that rabbit a bunny.
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The night I knew I loved him.
Contributed by
softerware
on
Monday, 5th November 2018 @ 07:27:32 PM in AEST
Topic:
happypoetry
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I can tell you the moment I fell in love;
Exactly, precisely, recalled.
It was Saturday night; our first date,
Yes, youre right;
The shortest courtship of all!
He was ten minutes late; but his driving was straight;
Til a rabbit jumped into the road.
He came to a stop, til the rabbit could hop;
Back to its forest abode.
But that wasn’t why I fell for the guy;
It was one word that made him my honey:
My heart went astray; I recall to this day;
When he called that rabbit a bunny.
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2018-11-05 19:27:32] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: The night I knew I loved him.
(User Rating: 1 ) by allforyou on
Monday, 5th November 2018 @ 08:29:32 PM AEST (User
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That is the cutest thing. Mine called cats kittys :o) as always, I love the things your poetry makes me feel. |
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Re: The night I knew I loved him.
(User Rating: 1 ) by PreciousKitten on
Tuesday, 6th November 2018 @ 04:47:35 AM AEST (User
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i love this poem. this is quite a story. excellent work |
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Re: The night I knew I loved him.
(User Rating: 1 ) by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 6th November 2018 @ 08:36:59 AM AEST (User
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//Another great write!
Thank you for sharing your talent.
😎 |
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Re: The night I knew I loved him.
(User Rating: 1 ) by Puppy_dog_eyes on
Friday, 9th November 2018 @ 10:00:49 PM AEST (User
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Had to smile again while reading this.
I can imagine a big smile on your face when you wrote it too.
If it was the Easter Bunny, I/'/m glad he got away :-)
Steve |
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Re: The night I knew I loved him.
(User Rating: 1 ) by JamesStockdale on
Saturday, 17th November 2018 @ 08:26:26 PM AEST (User
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Too cool Jaye
I talk that nonsense myself ;)
We all get it...….…….. Wonderful! |
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