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[title] => In the morning
[time] => 2018-09-28 04:00:56
[hometext] => I have not written in a long time. I am coming back.
[bodytext] => The birds outside are irritating, but also inspiring.
I have only just begun to notice their sound again.
Perhaps a sign of healing?
A bit of peace for my weary soul?
What a funny notion,
That the loud, piercing chirp of several birds outside my window
could signify... "peace"...
Those little bastards...
but, I do not wish to take this for-granted, so in case it is temporary...
I will listen for their song tomorrow............
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In the morning
Contributed by
purplestary
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Friday, 28th September 2018 @ 04:00:56 AM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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The birds outside are irritating, but also inspiring.
I have only just begun to notice their sound again.
Perhaps a sign of healing?
A bit of peace for my weary soul?
What a funny notion,
That the loud, piercing chirp of several birds outside my window
could signify... "peace"...
Those little bastards...
but, I do not wish to take this for-granted, so in case it is temporary...
I will listen for their song tomorrow............
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Re: In the morning
(User Rating: 1 ) by softerware on
Saturday, 29th September 2018 @ 06:01:52 PM AEST (User
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Sometimes, as you suggest, the cure is worse than the illness! Vague symptoms beget vague healings.
Pin your optimism on anything you desire, and it will signal your progress to the goal! Odd how we measure happiness, is it not?
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Re: In the morning
(User Rating: 1 ) by mvvenkataraman on
Sunday, 30th September 2018 @ 01:43:21 PM AEST (User
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I really appreciate the poet/'/s observation
He has given a very clear expression
First sound of birds gives only irritation
Later it has given him great inspiration
I love his poetry is my honest confession !
mvvenkataraman
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Re: In the morning
(User Rating: 1 ) by Jecks on
Friday, 25th January 2019 @ 05:04:58 PM AEST (User
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Wondering if you heard it again..?
For those of us struggling with our muse any sign of inspiration, irritating or not, is welcome. |
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Re: In the morning
(User Rating: 1 ) by JamesStockdale on
Tuesday, 18th August 2020 @ 03:50:02 AM AEST (User
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Come back! |
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