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[title] => Broken Hearts Mend
[time] => 2018-09-15 21:11:13
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[bodytext] => A broken heart,
can only last,
if it stays wrapped,
Inside its cast.
A mended heart,
can only feel,
when-cast removed-
you see its healed.
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Broken Hearts Mend
Contributed by
allforyou
on
Saturday, 15th September 2018 @ 09:11:13 PM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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A broken heart,
can only last,
if it stays wrapped,
Inside its cast.
A mended heart,
can only feel,
when-cast removed-
you see its healed.
Copyright ©
allforyou
... [
2018-09-15 21:11:13] (Date/Time posted on
site)
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Re: Broken Hearts Mend
(User Rating: 1 ) by Invierno on
Saturday, 15th September 2018 @ 09:53:15 PM AEST (User
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Metaphorically pleasing. A wee choppy, but nothing a revisit can/'/t heal.
I like it.
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Re: Broken Hearts Mend
(User Rating: 1 ) by softerware on
Sunday, 16th September 2018 @ 05:37:35 AM AEST (User
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A two line poem! Wish I could be so clever!
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Re: Broken Hearts Mend
(User Rating: 1 ) by Former_Member on
Thursday, 20th September 2018 @ 10:56:45 AM AEST (User
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How long does it take to heal? ⬅ Rhetorical.
Short and great. Thank you.
Tim |
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Re: Broken Hearts Mend
(User Rating: 1 ) by JamesStockdale on
Saturday, 17th November 2018 @ 10:19:53 PM AEST (User
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So true my friend, so true..... |
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