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[title] => The Sound of Seasons
[time] => 2018-05-27 23:39:00
[hometext] => snap, crackle and pop...
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the roar of waves in Winter,
rushing to the shore;
then drawing back to the sea
and breaking forth once more.
the burst of fire in Summer,
the crackling of flame;
the heralding of winds
as they carry forth its name.
the soft sighs of Autumn,
leaves crinkling in goodbye;
to yield their place on the branch
with an imperceptible sigh.
the birdsong of Spring,
the splitting of the seed;
the sounds and song of seasons,
no more than what I need.
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The Sound of Seasons
Contributed by
spike
on
Sunday, 27th May 2018 @ 11:39:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
NaturePoetry
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/ //// /
the roar of waves in Winter,
rushing to the shore;
then drawing back to the sea
and breaking forth once more.
the burst of fire in Summer,
the crackling of flame;
the heralding of winds
as they carry forth its name.
the soft sighs of Autumn,
leaves crinkling in goodbye;
to yield their place on the branch
with an imperceptible sigh.
the birdsong of Spring,
the splitting of the seed;
the sounds and song of seasons,
no more than what I need.
Copyright ©
spike
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2018-05-27 23:39:00] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: The Sound of Seasons
(User Rating: 1 ) by speedy on
Monday, 28th May 2018 @ 02:27:03 AM AEST (User
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Absolutely beautiful! Great write.
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Re: The Sound of Seasons
(User Rating: 1 ) by softerware on
Monday, 28th May 2018 @ 04:42:09 AM AEST (User
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Wow. You nailed it in this one! A sonnet to the seasons, each with its own speak. Your examples are crisp, descriptive, and sensitive to natures way. I like the picture too! Sets the mood very nicely. You must teach us how to do this.
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Re: The Sound of Seasons
(User Rating: 1 ) by Banjosandwitch on
Monday, 28th May 2018 @ 01:19:15 PM AEST (User
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NICE WORK |
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Re: The Sound of Seasons
(User Rating: 1 ) by JamesStockdale on
Tuesday, 29th May 2018 @ 09:55:05 PM AEST (User
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Lovely and calming write! |
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Re: The Sound of Seasons
(User Rating: 1 ) by Former_Member on
Friday, 1st June 2018 @ 03:05:22 AM AEST (User
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Beautiful |
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Re: The Sound of Seasons
(User Rating: 1 ) by JamesStockdale on
Thursday, 10th September 2020 @ 12:38:16 AM AEST (User
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This is great.....
Like the picture too.. |
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