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Array ( [sid] => 184787 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Would you....? [time] => 2018-01-10 16:47:24 [hometext] => please forgive my spelling. otherwise, please enjoy. [bodytext] => if i were to fall to my death
would you follow or sit back and watch
knowing full welll
that my heart forever beats for you
who still cares about you
and you alone
to think how foolish i was
to ever hope for another chance
for redemation
yet as my long awaited death comes
near
i honestly wonder
how did we ever get to this path
will i ever stop crying
would you rescue me from this fate
more importantly
do you still care about me
or even still love
i would join in death/'/s cold embrace
if it means we can be together
for all time
to give up my life
to sacrifice my goals and dreams
just to be at your side
that/'/s the chance
the risk that i am willing to take
why
because i know
living is not easy task
yet with you by my side
it felt easier yet challenging
before i part from you and this world
i look to you once more
and still await your answer

would you save me or let me be?

[comments] => 3 [counter] => 120 [topic] => 22 [informant] => PreciousKitten [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => LostLove )

Would you....?

Contributed by PreciousKitten on Wednesday, 10th January 2018 @ 04:47:24 PM in AEST
Topic: LostLove

if i were to fall to my death
would you follow or sit back and watch
knowing full welll
that my heart forever beats for you
who still cares about you
and you alone
to think how foolish i was
to ever hope for another chance
for redemation
yet as my long awaited death comes
near
i honestly wonder
how did we ever get to this path
will i ever stop crying
would you rescue me from this fate
more importantly
do you still care about me
or even still love
i would join in death/'/s cold embrace
if it means we can be together
for all time
to give up my life
to sacrifice my goals and dreams
just to be at your side
that/'/s the chance
the risk that i am willing to take
why
because i know
living is not easy task
yet with you by my side
it felt easier yet challenging
before i part from you and this world
i look to you once more
and still await your answer

would you save me or let me be?

Copyright © PreciousKitten ... [ 2018-01-10 16:47:24]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: Would you....? (User Rating: 1 )
by JamesStockdale on Wednesday, 10th January 2018 @ 04:59:01 PM AEST
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They say you can/'/t teach an old dog new tricks but maybe a kitten can learn :)
Sorry for some reason that hit me while I was reading your heartfelt poem....

Many times we have a second chance but we often find many ways to ruin it. That said sincerity goes a long way. I liked this poem and I think most of us have been there and many on both sides...

Re: Would you....? (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Friday, 12th January 2018 @ 08:50:20 AM AEST
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I/'/m not sure if I/'/ve ever loved anyone to the degree that i/'/d fill the void of death to be with them, but i like the way it/'/s written, i like your style

Re: Would you....? (User Rating: 1 )
by Durango on Sunday, 18th March 2018 @ 07:26:16 AM AEST
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Living is not an easy task, yet with you by my side it felt easier yet challenging. That/'/s a profound, honest expression. I love poems with questions that are not answered. It leaves the reader to ever wonder, doesn/'/t it?

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