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[title] => Crimson Love
[time] => 2017-12-17 13:34:00
[hometext] => All alone together, are we.
[bodytext] => Crimson love, we should have known;
No cure for loneliness is owned;
A ransom for an empty heart;
To capture what will soon depart.
Had we Kings horses, and had we Kings men;
We could not keep love from leaving again.
She gifts us no warning we’ve made a mistake;
But leaves us alone in the darkness awake;
Pierced by the echos of bittersweet laughter;
Amused we’d believe she’d remain ever after.
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Crimson Love
Contributed by
softerware
on
Sunday, 17th December 2017 @ 01:34:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
insomniac
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Crimson love, we should have known;
No cure for loneliness is owned;
A ransom for an empty heart;
To capture what will soon depart.
Had we Kings horses, and had we Kings men;
We could not keep love from leaving again.
She gifts us no warning we’ve made a mistake;
But leaves us alone in the darkness awake;
Pierced by the echos of bittersweet laughter;
Amused we’d believe she’d remain ever after.
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Re: Crimson Love
(User Rating: 1 ) by JamesStockdale on
Sunday, 17th December 2017 @ 03:01:56 PM AEST (User
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Only the lucky avoid this. Age is the equalizer.
It can be devastating for the young but as you know
when you get older you just sigh and say next. Well, a survivor will do this.
Sometimes we are more enamored by the time and place, and a stage in our life than the actual person but many are unable or unwilling to decipher that fact.
Beautifully written poem!!! |
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Re: Crimson Love
(User Rating: 1 ) by nightwolf on
Sunday, 17th December 2017 @ 11:40:37 PM AEST (User
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Beautifully written and the emotion was strong. I enjoyed reading this |
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Re: Crimson Love
(User Rating: 1 ) by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 20th December 2017 @ 09:58:53 PM AEST (User
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//She gifts us no warning we’ve made a mistake;
But leaves us alone in the darkness awake//
Yeah, no /*****/!!!
Powerful poem!!!! 👍 |
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Re: Crimson Love
(User Rating: 1 ) by RussellReinhardt on
Sunday, 24th December 2017 @ 02:57:12 AM AEST (User
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I wouldn/'/t say only the lucky escapee this or should I.
Maybe, because I believe you create your own luck with a pure heart and determination alike.
The purest of Hearts would let go because it/'/s wisdom will know that if love turns from you it was not love to begin with.
Non the less an awesome peace you have written for us. Something that will require much pondering for some, and for others I/'/m sure a light will go on.
Greetings
Rus
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Re: Crimson Love
(User Rating: 1 ) by ammar on
Sunday, 24th December 2017 @ 01:00:21 PM AEST (User
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You wrote this wonderfully. I really enjoyed the ending.
ammar |
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